A Mouse Under The Bed

[rammstein_twood]

Summary: Ianto and Gwen are amused to learn of Jack's greatest phobia - a species of alien mouse. But when the mouse escapes and Gwen chases it under Jack's bed, she is in for a shock as Jack and Ianto take things swiftly to the bedroom, oblivious that Gwen is still underneath...
Warnings: sex
Spoilers: Series 1 deleted scenes
Character Pairings: Jack

Comments

[goddess_ophelia]

LOLOLOL!!! I'd pay good money to see Jack shrieking like a girl over a mouse!

Good job!

[rammstein_twood]

thankyou :D - yes it would sound odd :)

[wykling]

LOL hahahahahahaha
Oh poor Jack but I can understand him, it's the legs xP
It's always the legs, stupid legs...
I don't like spiders *shudders* strangely enough I can imagine those spidery mouse things to be quite cute...hmm... seems I'm pretty conflicted over them *laughs*
*Hugs* Nice job Nat!
xxx

[rammstein_twood]

thankyou very much :D
i dont mind spiders but we have a new poisionous species in england now :O

[stargazer60]

Oh, I love this..Jack scared of a little mouse.

And I'd love to hear the story of how he acquired this phobia...

[rammstein_twood]

lol - Glad you liked it :D
i may write it one day :)
xx

[rambleinblue]

Poor Jack, I don't like spiders either and one that is as big as a mouse can't be good, no matter how adorable it is.

[rammstein_twood]

lol - sympathy with Jack :D
thanx for reading and commenting.
xx

[missthingsplace]

I my god, that had me chuckling like mad, brilliant!

[rammstein_twood]

Glad you found it funny :D
xxx