Week 6: Just take a walk

[ramblingraccoon]

Battle Plans

MS. BURKE: Hey Ron! I tried to move your appointment up as soon as I could. From your voicemail things don't sound too good...

RON: Hello Ms. Burke. Yeah not to good and I apologize for being a bother.

MS. BURKE: No bother at all. So tell me, what’s been going on.

RON: Well the situation with Ms. Mayne isn't doing any better and I

Comments

[rayaso]

I love the way you told this story entirely through dialog, and the ending was wonderful.

[static_abyss]

I like how fitting your title was. I also enjoyed how much character you packed into the dialogue.

[murielle]

Your dialogue is wonderful! Your characters are drawn clearly through it, as is your plot.

Well done!

[alcat666]

Such writing so great much wow!

[halfshellvenus]

I remember this landlord/super from an earlier story. He really DOES go above and beyond for his tenants.