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aprilkat December 27 2006, 14:33:31 UTC
I love this story. You write the romance with such heart, which makes the sex moving as well as hot.

I like how in this situation they both screw up a bit around Elizabeth, but learn from it and move on.

That house! I remember seeing it before - THE dream house. (Gifts you with $3MM to buy it.)

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rakshi December 27 2006, 15:24:18 UTC
Thank you, sweetie. Makes me so happy that you're loving it. More drama and happiness to come!! I LOVE that house! And it really IS in Topanga Canyon.

Thank you for commenting. It's so important to me.

Love..

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rakshi December 27 2006, 15:22:51 UTC
Could have made it more of a cliff hanger maybe.. but I am SO happy that you like the way it's flowing!! And I am very grateful to you for commenting, sweetie. It means the world to me. Thank you.. and I'm thrilled that you're enjoying it.

Love..

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ladymoreta December 27 2006, 17:09:32 UTC
love it. :)

well written, beautiful and heart breaking in places. also love the pics.

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rakshi December 27 2006, 18:19:02 UTC
Thank you, me dear! I'm so happy that you love the story. And I'm very grateful to you for taking the time to comment. It means so much to me.

Love...

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carolina30363 December 27 2006, 19:54:34 UTC
I love how you built this chapter, how you put on it, love, passion, joy but also pain, distrss and sadness...

It is a perfect strong mixture... above all I loved Elijha's failed attemp to make Lizzy understand his relationship with Sean and her stubbor teenegerly way of reacting...

greatly done

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rakshi December 27 2006, 21:16:43 UTC
Bless you, sweetie. And I love YOU for taking the time to comment. I'm so happy that you like the story. There'll be lots more good stuff in the weeks ahead.

Love..

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hullo_lovely December 28 2006, 01:12:00 UTC
absolutely beautiful :)
You are without a doubt my favourite writer. perfect amount of everything needed for a brilliant story! aw i love this story so much!

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rakshi December 28 2006, 01:24:26 UTC
Bless you!! Both for thinking that.. and for taking the time to comment and say so. I am thrilled to my soul that you are loving this story. It means a lot to me... and I LOVE hearing that it means a lot to you too.

Thank you, baby.

Love...

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