Comments | rakshi: FIC: 'Teach Me To Kiss' - Sean/Elijah

rakshi

FIC: 'Teach Me To Kiss' - Sean/Elijah - NC-17

Aug 10, 2005 15:37

The Trilogy Weekend Challenge. The story about Sean teaching Elijah to kiss. We decided this story was necessary after watching Elijah's screen kiss in 'Bumblebee Flies Anyway'. This is my offering for that challenge. I was blessed to have cara_chapel along at the trailer this weekend, and she gave it a once over.

( Clicky, clicky for the Sean/Elijah. )

story

Comments 37

hobbitlove83 August 10 2005, 19:57:04 UTC

The hotness... yes, that was wonderful,

but OMG, the love!!

I just love the way you describe
Sean and Lijah love,
and I can't thank you enough,
darling Rak!

You just managed to turn my
yucky day into one filled with love!

*hugs you tight*

rakshi August 11 2005, 00:17:09 UTC

Thank YOU for being kind enough to comment. It means a lot to me.. and to every author. I'm so happy if you liked the story.

*hugs*

catw August 10 2005, 20:26:43 UTC

you are back ! ! ! And you brought us a story ! Thanks, hon. I love the way you write Sean and Elijah. It's always so much love between them. *hugs*

rakshi August 11 2005, 00:17:50 UTC

I AM back! I had a great time with Cara... and wrote this while I was at the trailer with her. I'm so happy you like it, Cat!

*hugs*

carolina30363 August 10 2005, 20:33:49 UTC

So sweet, so hot and so full of love...It was passionate, delicate....amazing.
Your Sean/Elijah always makes my day!
Thank you for sharing!

rakshi August 11 2005, 00:18:23 UTC

Thank you, sweetie. I'm happy you like it.

*hugs you*

archerlass August 10 2005, 21:22:18 UTC

Very hot! I love the dialog, and this - “I want to own you, you know,” Sean told him,
- really got to me. Thank you! :)

rakshi August 11 2005, 00:19:20 UTC

I know! That line got to me too! LOL! I love the idea of Sean wanting to totally possess Elijah. Grrrrrr!!! I'm really glad you like the story, love.

*hugs*

nolyana August 10 2005, 23:37:55 UTC

Goodness me! Rak, you trying to kill me or somethin'? I was reading this and having it all in a mini film going through my mind scene by scene...guh!

Utterly beautiful, and hot and sexy and it's your sean and your elijah and it's their love that saves the day! ♥

ps: Gimme Seanie to teach me how to kiss any day. Im game. And, of course, Lij will be there for the learning... ;D

rakshi August 11 2005, 00:20:16 UTC

Nope. Not trying to kill anyone. Just writing my guys and loving it! LOL! I have to tell you.. those images got to me TOO! Whew!!

*hugs*