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Sep 30, 2009 17:55

title: when things are different (and so we start over)
author: chartre
rating: pg-13
pairing: jiyong/seungri
summary: he just brushed through the hallway and swung the door open just like that and now he’s staring at his back, his clavicles, all smooth and white and maknae-like.
notes: fiction. my first big bang fic, spare me! \o/ somewhat a leader-and- ( Read more... )

big bang, jiyong/seungri, oneshot, fail

Comments 31

mangalover93 September 30 2009, 10:59:19 UTC

OMFG !!! THIS WAS TOO AMAZING, GOOD ETC.. *SPEECHLESS*

mangalover93 September 30 2009, 11:03:05 UTC

HELL?!?! YOUR FIRST?!?! NO DISAPPOINTMENT!!
YOU TOTALLY NEED TO WRITE MORE GRI <33333
welcome to the community *jumping around*
*HUGS*

chartre September 30 2009, 13:44:40 UTC

ROFL YEY? Thank you thank you! *u*

vaneszikkipower September 30 2009, 11:32:17 UTC

This is amazing, i liked it.
A little sad by time, but life is sad somtimes.
You did an amazing work!
Congratulations!!!

chartre September 30 2009, 13:43:20 UTC

I was afraid it would be too dramatic, but thank you! :)

vaneszikkipower September 30 2009, 18:35:33 UTC

You're welcome :)

huey_tsai September 30 2009, 13:35:37 UTC

I'm not that much of a FAN. right? but I definitely find this sweet. But, SeungRi's belittling himself too much, but that's because of the situation, right? Okay, I'm talking too much.

Congrats, Kwesha. LOL. I kind of love you for not "bigla-ing" me with smut. For a second there, i really thought it was! I got scared XD.

chartre September 30 2009, 13:40:22 UTC

well, it's a start. :) Thank you reading Weh ♥ I wrote this one right after the other one, so naturally I'm not yet done with the 'other one'. :> But don't worry, I won't bigla you with it. XD

huey_tsai September 30 2009, 13:51:08 UTC

Just go ahead and blush, Krizia. TEEHEE. Pangasar eh. :3 *prays that you wont finish it anytime now, i'm not ready* KEEDING, Yes, Paluin mo na ako kung gusto mo.

tees2mai September 30 2009, 15:02:41 UTC

this was really good, esp for your first fic
I love both Seungri and Jiyong in this. I think you've captured them well and I love reading fics where Ri is hurt since it makes Ji's love for him grow

welcome to the community, hope to see more from you :)

chartre October 1 2009, 10:11:38 UTC

Thank you very much! :'D I'm very flattered ♥

parkchoongjae September 30 2009, 16:04:08 UTC

THIS IS SO GOOD. <3

*read's above comments* You're also Filipina?! OMG! Another Filipina GRi fan that writes good gri fics! YEY! and you write smut too? omg. I request a GRI smut from you! waaaaaaaah.

anyway, this fic is an easy read. i love it. it's full of angst, love and hope for jiyong and seungri. :) love!! <3

you should write more! this fandom needs more gri writers! haha.

*i'm meg by the way.*

chartre October 1 2009, 10:13:45 UTC

Hello there Meg, yes I'm a Filipina too by nationality; I'm pure Chinese XD;

A smut fic is on its way, since this is supposed to be my second-started fic, so please wait for it? And thank you very much!! ♥ *u*

parkchoongjae October 2 2009, 16:54:52 UTC

I'm 3/4 chinese. waahahaha.
what can I call you? is chartre your personal lj? and raizael you fanfic lj?

i now officially love you for telling me that another smutfic is coming. i swear, the world needs more awesome gri writers like you. :) I so love the fact that the community is growing and there are active writers posting awesome stuff. :)

gri is an awesome pairing right? <3

chartre October 2 2009, 17:11:42 UTC

Yey! XD raizael is fine. :) And yes and yes. I separated my fics because I wanted to keep them public for reading (as you can see, I keep a friends-only journal :B).

B'aww thank you for the love ♥ I'm flattered but I'm not awesome like that. XD;; Though G-RI is an awesome pairing, and I do want to try and write more of it. :'D