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[raizael]

title: where the light shines less
author: chartre
rating: pg-13
pairing: nishikato
summary: well I hate you, shige. we should go out more, you know?
notes: fictional. a little detached and lacking-sense, this was meant to be a typical "i noticed you because i had accidental sex with you" sort of fic butreuslurid helped me put in a little more for fun. i owe you hun

Comments

[fairy_illusions]

wheee fic :]

[fairy_illusions]

Ah it's the imperfections that makes one perfect, ne?

Ryo and Shige in all their awkward glory. I think it's why I think they're my OTP. Where else do you find people so similar yet also different enough that their imperfections just gets patched up by the other? :]

I really liked it :] It definitely has your style to it. When I read it, I want to connect the sentences together and make it into a picture :]

&hearts

[indian_monsoon]

Wow, this was wonderful. I really love reading all of your fics and this was no exceptions. I liked the awkwardness, the tense atmosphere, the end which was adorable by the way.

And as fairy said, this may be why they are my OTP. They are awkward and weird around each other, but they patch things up. Thank you, this was amazing! Such a great thing to read first thing in the morning!

[chartre]

You're welcome, and thank you for reading :') I actually had qualms about ending it this way because of how everything fell into place, but I'm glad you liked it. XD

Ryo/Shige are my OTP too! And I agree, no one does imperfect-and-at-the-same-time-perfect better than ryo/shige. ♥

[indian_monsoon]

I think they do so well together is because they are so normal around each other. :D

OOO RYOSHIGE :D

[c_shayne]

*smiles*

this is lovely! ^__^

thank you so much for writing this!

i totally didnt expect the last part. it was so sweet! ^_______^

*smiles*

and my icon couldnt be more relevant. YAYYY

[ununoriginal]

it's a great summer fic, i liked the sort-of listless feel at the beginning and the romance at the very end was very sweet :)

[raizael]

Thank you! The detached feeling I mentioned earlier was actually directed towards the beginning of this fic, but I'm happy you like it. :'D

[reuslurid]

“Why don’t you buy yourself an ass first before you decide to show yourself here?”

Isn't Shige's existing one big enough already? Kidding. xDD Way more filling than Mama's flatness, at least.

anywhere near the coolness factor of the Nishikido Ryo

Oh God, Ryo. LMAO.

when he curses out loud and kicks the darn thing away from his feet.

I'm still "cute-d" out by this. It's SO imaginable. xDD

“Well I hate you, Shige. We should go out more, you know?”

I LIKE this line.

“It’s adorable,” he says and pushes the strand of hair on Koyama’s face behind his ear.

F*** YEAH! I forgot you were doing this so it caught me by surprise. A VERY NICE SURPRISE. Ohgoshohgosh. *balls fist

[chartre]

LOL Hayden Kho and his mom are cameos in your comment! HAHA~

I didn't expect you to read it since you were just beta-ing parts of it for me, but yey, ilu for reading ♥ And yey for the extensive comment, this was not content-less at all, I'd like to consider your comments in when we talked about this in YM. Anyhow, thanks~ ♥

AND LOL I owe you lots, especially on that Koyama/Ryo scene, haha!

PS. Huey says hi. :D

[reuslurid]

LOL. Eh well, I read PARTS so I'd have to read the finish product. XD

SO WEIRD. You're right here sleeping on the lower bunk. LOL. Not even properly lying down.

LOL maybe I was just craving for Koyama action. Haha!

Hi HUEY. Even if I talked to you, what, 2 seconds ago?

[chartre]

Honey, you creep me out. You make me scared just thinking about what you were planning to do with me last night. GASP. Just kidding, happy birthday ILUUU ♥

AND LOL you're just here in the room lying down AND LOL WAIT YOU LEFT. Anyway. A little Koyama love puts a whole lot of love. Haha! XD