FIC: Apples In My Basket (America/France + states)

[transemacabre]

Title: Apples In My Basket
Characters/Pairings: America/France, lots of states (Vermont, Louisiana, Virginia, Georgia, Alabama, Illinois, just to name a few)
Warnings: Mild sexual content. Mpreg.
Rating: T for Teen
Summary: Written for the Kink Meme prompt for 'America, barefoot and pregnant'. France comes to visit and glimpses America's happy home

Comments

[jinsai]

YOU!! You're the one who wrote this!!

..I'm the one who requested it and you... you just blew me away with the fill. Like I said there, I was expecting something cracky or pervy or both, but tossed it out there anyways, and I got this incredibly beautiful, heartwarming fill instead. You made my day AND restored my faith in the kink meme.

Unending thanks for this!

(If you like the France/America pairing... I'm also the mod for a_moveablefeast, which is the comm dedicated to that pairing.)

[green_phantom4]

This was lovely. I loved how Veronique made the apple tarts, and how her eyes are green despite being France's. And Malcom kicking Conor (so true!). And... and... This was just wonderful. There was so many little details that just said home to me... *Grins like an idiot*

[geogirl15]

Oh, I remember this from the kink meme!! I loved this fic, it was just so adorable and sweet and oh god FRANCE wanting to stay...Really, it's quite good, I'm unable to come up with decent words to explain why I like it and how much I like it.

[chromatic_coma]

Oh, I think this is my favorite America mpreg fic out there (normally I dislike the idea, but this was just too cute to resist). All the details, the way you described the children, the family, the things they did, it all felt comforting and homey and soothing. I can understand why Francis would not want to leave; I wouldn't either.

I really loved the part where you contrasted what Francis was saying to what he was thinkng; it was complete genius.

Truly this is an amazing piece of fiction :)

[sara_rojo]

Great story!!! I'm impressed at the high number of characters you managed, and how well. For the most part I didn't even need the chart at the end, which is quite impressive considering I'm not American, British or French, and know very little of USA states. That speaks truly well of your writing skills ^^

I loved how normal the whole situation of variedly fathered children was treated, and the subtle way in which you made America's peace and prosperity truly desirable to a person from a much exhausted Europe at that point. And I laughed at Iggy's children being distrustful of France, LOL (I was so hoping for a direct confrontation before the endXD). Very nice read, and very sensual yet homey and sweet at the end