Comments | rairakku1234: The Adventure of the Civil Partnership Chapter 13 Scuffed

rairakku1234

The Adventure of the Civil Partnership Chapter 13 Scuffed

Jun 20, 2012 19:47

Sherlock and John are hunting a kidnapper who has been taking newlywed couples across the Greater London Area and Sherlock has the perfect way to flush him out. Warning: Pre-Slash/Slash of Sherlock/John Work in Progress - Very Slow Updates

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sherlock/john, case fic, sherlock bbc, civilpartnership, slash

Comments 12

ariadnechan June 21 2012, 05:59:54 UTC

Garden grave ground

I'm worry the guy appear now and they can't make it to send the message or the call

Please update soon

Thank you rairakku1234 June 21 2012, 20:22:45 UTC

I am really glad you enjoyed the twist. I have been waiting to get to this point almost since I started this story, so it is good to know that my readers are enjoying it.

Thanks for wonderful review,
Rairakku

geeyaa_ficca June 21 2012, 11:39:22 UTC

Oh my god, this is gripping! I desperately want to know what becomes of these small touches, and kisses and smiles,; not to mention the exciting plot and case.

Looking forward to the next update :3

Thank you!! rairakku1234 June 21 2012, 20:04:12 UTC

I am really glad that you are finding the case and the story exciting. I really want Sherlock to tell us about those touches, smiles, and kisses as well.

:)

Thank you for a wonderful review,
Rairakku

tiffy190706 June 21 2012, 19:07:53 UTC

oh the circle becomes tighter around our killer...

hehehehhe rairakku1234 June 21 2012, 19:33:36 UTC

One can only hope it is. :)

Thanks so much for reviewing, it's great to know people are enjoying the story.

Rairakku

talimenios79 June 23 2012, 21:38:10 UTC

Oooh another wonderful chapter. I can't wait for more.

Thank you rairakku1234 June 24 2012, 00:55:10 UTC

I am really glad that you enjoyed it. :)

Rairakku

in2lalaland July 13 2012, 15:36:40 UTC

Seriously, I have no words for this. I've had so much fun reading this story I'm kind of stunned. There are so much going on and so many things said and unsaid that I just feel like staring at this page until a new chapter magically appears.

This is very well done and I'm VERY impressed by your writing and story telling.

Thank you for a wonderful story, I can hardly wait to see what's going to happen next. I just bet it's going to hurt so sweetly to read it.

Wow. Thank you rairakku1234 July 14 2012, 15:15:36 UTC

That is an amazing review. I am really glad that you are enjoying the story so far. I have been having a lot of fun trying to write a story even slightly worthy of ACD and Sherlock. I enjoy hearing that people are enjoying reading it as much as I am enjoying writing it.

More is coming once I manage to wrestle my muse into submission.

Thanks for wonderful review and some great encouragment.
Rairakku