Glad to find a story that does justice to each character, without any bashing or twisting, and has Jack as the strong connection between Ianto and Gwen, like glue really. You can feel his precense and he's very much a very of the story. Very beautiful.
i like it. think it's well written. umm...i'm pretty sure ianto and gwen never slept together, but that aside, i think this is a really accurate portrayal of their relationship.
i kind of hate gwen bashing janto fics not because i like gwen soo much, but because i dont think ianto or jack hates gwen. i think ianto cares a lot about gwen, and i think that a lot of people forget just how bonding loving the same person can be.
i'm really glad you explored the relationship between gwen and ianto and that bond of jack. again, i really do doubt it'd lead to them in bed together, but if they were to sleep together, it would go along the lines of something like this. with gwen just wanting to know what being with jack is like and ianto being the next best thing.
it's disturbing and messed up, but that is just oh so torchwood.
and the writing, the description, had a great flow to it. i really want the sequel.
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yeah... gwen/ianto is not usually my thing... unless Jack's there, too ;) which, well, he sort of is. in spirit.
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Very in character and realistic.
Glad to find a story that does justice to each character, without any bashing or twisting, and has Jack as the strong connection between Ianto and Gwen, like glue really. You can feel his precense and he's very much a very of the story. Very beautiful.
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i kind of hate gwen bashing janto fics not because i like gwen soo much, but because i dont think ianto or jack hates gwen. i think ianto cares a lot about gwen, and i think that a lot of people forget just how bonding loving the same person can be.
i'm really glad you explored the relationship between gwen and ianto and that bond of jack. again, i really do doubt it'd lead to them in bed together, but if they were to sleep together, it would go along the lines of something like this. with gwen just wanting to know what being with jack is like and ianto being the next best thing.
it's disturbing and messed up, but that is just oh so torchwood.
and the writing, the description, had a great flow to it. i really want the sequel.
kudos!
crazytook
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But then I saw you wrote it and thought I'd give it a go.
And you blew me away! Oh it was just great - so raw and...OO.
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