Comments | rainquenched: New Ways to Smile, Jim/Pam, NC-17

rainquenched

New Ways to Smile, Jim/Pam, NC-17

Nov 04, 2007 20:27

Title: New Ways to Smile
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aku November 5 2007, 04:20:35 UTC

Oh, man, this is perfect. There's nothing gratuitous about it - it's soft and sexy, and the facial expressions are just so Jim. Beautiful!

rainquenched November 5 2007, 18:25:31 UTC

Thank you! :)

lyn09er November 5 2007, 04:47:40 UTC

i love the perfection of this. its sweet and well written and i love it. i especially like the last paragraph.

rainquenched November 5 2007, 18:25:42 UTC

Thanks so much :D

sharipep November 5 2007, 05:06:13 UTC

gorgeous, beautiful, perfect imagery.

rainquenched November 5 2007, 18:25:52 UTC

Thanks!

misswritten November 5 2007, 05:29:54 UTC

that was awesome. i loved it

rainquenched November 5 2007, 18:26:13 UTC

Thanks :)

neverenoughjam November 5 2007, 05:42:24 UTC

all she can think is that she wanted it slower but it’s here and this is it.
He makes a low, sweet sound when he comes
I love both of those lines. The first one is about how first-time sex is never like you imagined it, and the second is about how much they've wanted this and it's okay that it's not perfect. *applauds*

rainquenched November 5 2007, 18:27:02 UTC

Thank you! Actually, you got it perfectly. I wanted to write imperfections with them because I feel like sometimes they're written a little too perfect that that's not realistic.