6918 fic

[raining_helium]

Yay, I did it /cheers. Didn't get to put in as much blood as I would've liked >.> And Mukuro's on laughing gas. And while it is indeed very sexy, 6918 isn't my top ship either. C&C is always appreciated.

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We Are Locked In An Embrace Of Hate

Comments

[splashie_xyt]

Waaaah~ Your style is really nice. I love it!

[raining_helium]

Thanks! I was trying to make it as if it was in Hibari's head, but I quit after the first paragraph :P And sorry for late comment.

[tragicallyditch]

THIS IS SEXY.

When I first started reading I thought it might have been Mukuro talking because it seems very his style to me. XD;
I don't think Mukuro laughs too much. Mukuro is a character that, umn, likes to laugh so he can laugh all he wants. But I love this line: "Mukuro stops laughing again. It's so very hard to keep laughing when others don't join in. " It made me giggle. XDD~
I also really like the ending. I think it wrapped things up nicely but didn't make it totally DEFINITE so there's that feeling that they'll meet again.

Nice jobbb~!! ;) <3

[raining_helium]

THANKS :D And sorry for replying late OTL

Yeah, on reading it now it does seem that way, huh xD Lol, it's just that every time I made him laugh I found myself cringing, but what else would he do? Smile even more!? Haha, I find endings are best when they don't actually END things xD

[rephen]

i enjoyed it.

your mukuro's very sexy. and your hibari's just. delicious <3

[raining_helium]

Thanks :) And sorry for replying so much later OTL

Haha, I tried to make them true to their canon selves xD