{Theta'Amor} Pandora's Box

[raine_seraphim]

Title - {Theta'Amor}

Characters - Nine/Rose

Summary - Months after Rose was left in a parallel universe with her mum and dad, Rose has finally in some capacity moved on from the Doctor. Now, as the winter months roll into the British countryside where her new home resides, Rose and her family celebrate their first Christmas and New Years together.

Comments

[bloose09]

Oh my goodness. This chapter was like a love poem. I really liked how you described the magnitude of what Rose felt as the Bad Wolf and her sudden remembering that the Doctor had kissed her. You did an excellent job of taking Rose from the depths of despair to the heights of pure joy. I always enjoy a good reunion fic.

It was hard to pick out one part, but this was my favorite:
His eyes crisp and clean like the pure and fresh snow that fell from the heavens...
He stood there draped in a loose fitting white silk shirt that hung over his shoulders like a tarp, donning a pair of charcoal dress trousers. standing barefoot and beautiful in the heavy-laden and freezing fog. His blue eyes looked haunted, almost shelled out at their core. The pain engraved in his guilt ridden expression, the regret of not arriving there sooner ripping him apart. Tears fell freely without shame from his eyes, he looked so much smaller somehow. He looked so lost and so fragile. If he were a rock, he'd already been eroded down to sand.  The Doctor isn't even

[raine_seraphim]

So, how have you been liking what I've been doing with this series thus far?

[bloose09]

I absolutely 100% love what you have done so far. I really like the descriptive language and the deep emotions throughout this fic. I can't wait to see where you take us next. They certainly have a lot to hash out between the two of them!