Lie to Me

Feb 12, 2012 22:10

Title: Lie to Me
Pairing: Park Yoochun/OC
Rating: PG-13
Summary: How sure can you be when he tells you, he loves you?
A/N: This is what happens when I'm...I don't know. I hope you read and comment. It's been a while since I wrote a fic.

“Do you think I should believe you when you tell me you love me?” )

length: one-shot, band: dong bang shin ki, genre: drama, pairing: yoochun and oc, rating: pg

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bingkay_baxia February 14 2012, 13:28:46 UTC
hmm? i don't really know what to say but my mind feels blank...

you said this came out because of something related to what you're feeling?

i just feel weird reading this, or is it the feeling you want to convey to your readers?

yeah...that's it...

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raindrop_symph February 14 2012, 16:24:14 UTC
i understand if your mind is blank..im not even sure about this..thanks for reading!!!

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still_doll_15 February 26 2012, 09:00:22 UTC
I have one thing to complain about this fic: it's too short. xDDD

But, wow. just wow. I see improvement in your writing, unnie. ^^ Tho may ilang typos and double words, like that "I ran traced" on the first part.

ANYWAYS, I like the flow of it. and parang kaawa-awa si Yoochun dito somehow... Walang sequel? xDD I would like to know what really happened behind it.^^

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raindrop_symph February 26 2012, 09:12:33 UTC
Thanks Gee..That was just an emotional outlet kind of thing..Not sure if i have something to add to that..

Improvement in writing? Thanks..

I'll edit it when I'm not lazy..

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still_doll_15 February 26 2012, 09:47:51 UTC
emotional outlet how exactly? based on a real life happening ba to, if I may ask?

Yeap. Your latest fics have more descriptions eh ^^
Btw, have I mentioned na I have a printed copy of your first fic in my room? xD

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raindrop_symph February 26 2012, 09:50:24 UTC
Di naman based on real life.. Just a view on something..

Ahh..Ganun bah? I miss writing fics..

Really? Haha..Yung My Only Wish This Year?

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