[FIC] The Elevator Game

May 06, 2010 22:19

Name: The Elevator Game
Pairing: Junseung
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Smut, PWP, Romance, Humor
Summary: Hyunseung and Junhyung haven't had sex since before B2ST flew to California for the Korean Music Festival, and since they arrived, the two haven't had a moment alone together. Needless to say...when Junhyung finds one, no matter how compromising..he jumps ( Read more... )

pairing: junseung, rainbowtongues, fanfiction: oneshot, b2st, rating: nc-17

Leave a comment

Comments 95

rainbowtongues May 7 2010, 02:45:12 UTC
Spotzie! For my Birthday girl! wanpanda <33

Reply

wanpanda May 7 2010, 05:44:10 UTC
...jksdahdjaksdah. i have school today and your fic just turned my body into jello.
but you know i love you even more for writing this,right? <3
no constructive criticism or not even a decent comment can come out now,i promise i'll think of something later ,,,
homg just...awesome.

Reply

wanpanda May 7 2010, 05:44:51 UTC
i love you wifey! just in case you forgot <3

Reply

rainbowtongues May 7 2010, 13:00:29 UTC
aww! I'm so glad you liked it! I wrote it for youu!

Your incoherent comments make me smilee <3

I love you my wifey dearr, sorry I was in Cali on your birthdayy but I hope you had an awesome dayy my lovee!

Reply


ttaejoong_hyuk May 7 2010, 04:00:03 UTC
JDDLGAJK A OOOOH MY GAAAAAAH!!!! THIS IS ONLY YOUR SECOND TIME WRITING!!! dagjkda my goshers you don't know how badly i've been craving some smutty junseung and adjflhgjkajdgh this just hit the spot and then some!!! jdahalj gaaah, i LOOOOOVE it!!! hyunseung and junhyung!!! dang that was just HOT!!! and ajdghaldjka i don't know how many times i spazzed but freaking every paragraph was like =Q_____ ahahaha!!!! ajahlgj thank you!!! thank you for writing this magnificent and glorious masterpiece that is junseung smut <3333 lol, i sound like a really big pervert...which i swear i'm not!!! it's just the side affects of craving!!! lol

Reply

rainbowtongues May 7 2010, 13:02:54 UTC
This comment made me grin SO widely! Yes Ive only ever written full out fanfiction smut twice, with this being the second timee. I am so happy I was able to satiate your needs for Junseung sexytiems haha! I had so much fun writing it!

I seriously LOVE you for this comment! Makes me so happy that you loved it sooooo much!

Yes, you do sound like a really big perv, but that's okay. I'm an even bigger perv. I WROTE the fic babe haha.

Thanks for commentingg! <3

Reply

ttaejoong_hyuk May 10 2010, 04:41:34 UTC
puwahahaha!!! i knew it!! it's hard not to come off as a pervert!!! lololol, well then we're all just a big happy bunch of pervs..let's be proud!!! lol, i'm happy my comment made you happy!

Reply

rainbowtongues May 11 2010, 00:50:20 UTC
haha it did!

PERVERT PRIDEEE!

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

rainbowtongues May 7 2010, 11:43:50 UTC
Ohhh! THANK YOU! *tacklehugs* My not-so-secret reader <3 I'm so glad you loved it! I'm flailing in my seat and grinning! *tries to freeze together your gooself*

This was the hottest Junseung smut I've ever read!
I'm so happy you posted! I've missed your amazing writing! Junseung is like magic in your hands!

REALLY?! ever? Magic? ohh thanks so much! <33 I want to go write more now

Reply

(The comment has been removed)

rainbowtongues May 8 2010, 00:19:05 UTC
HORRAY for words darling <33 *smothers in love*

You can spazz with me, and seriously you're farr too kind :]]

I'm extremely lazy, but I'll work hard to produce more fics! I still have one I really like, that i've been working on for a WHILE, but haven't yet finished.

Reply


momof May 7 2010, 06:32:21 UTC
Hello, I've just died and come back.

Oh my sweet Jesus, what kind of comment should I make now when I can hardly type anything coherent atm?

Wanpanda, Im telling you, this is one of those bestest gifts you can ever recieve on your birthdays! Yes I know that juicy, dirty and f8cking hot smut might not be everybody's ideal gift but you're a JunSeung freak like me. That's why I know you must have enjoyed every little bit in this.

Awww, the last ounce of my sanity just dissipated the moment they got into that room. After that, I cant rmb having done anything but staying numb and dazed. My brain exploded just like how it did when Junhyung started his dirty talks in the elevator.

Oh friend, i swear I'll stalk your LJ FOREVER! Or until HyunSeung stops looking so effing gorgeous, that is. And pardon my poor wording and gramar in this comment cause you cant expect me to stay calm after reading THIS *sighs*

Reply

rainbowtongues May 7 2010, 11:58:56 UTC
Thanks so much!! <33 How I love my official LJ Stalker *glomp loves*

I'm glad you loved it! So so happy! Considering this is only my second time writing a full on smutfic xP

Looks like you'll be stalking me for a while because Hyunseung's sexy isn't going anywhere xP Trust me, he's even more amazingly gorgeous in person hahaha <333

The dirty talk parts of this fic were seriously like, my favorite haha!

Reply

momof May 7 2010, 13:43:24 UTC
He can possibly be even MORE beautiful in person? Awww, Im so jealous of you *sighs* You got to see that dazzling creature (AND his fellow bandmates who are just as hot) while I was here saving fantaken photos and watching fancams *cries*

But Imma forgive you since you wrote us this hot piece of smutfic after getting back. And i forgot to say considering the fact that this is only your 2nd time writing sth like this, you're my new fav smut author now! Srsly, you have to know how GOOD you are at this!

Reply

rainbowtongues May 8 2010, 00:15:55 UTC
haha! I gave that dazzling creature two cookies, in person, on two separate occasions. and he remembered how to spell my name. OKAY im going to stop before you actually hurt me. sorry im gushing. <3

I'm glad you forgivee me! AND consider me a good enough smut writer to go into your favorites! THANKS SO MCUH ILY <3

I originally didn't like this fic once i finished it, but I thought it was pretty good once I read through it.

Reply


numptysmeg May 7 2010, 16:44:48 UTC
I'm so jealous that you met Hyunseung. I'm so cursed, living in England.

I can imagine Hyunseung being resistant but Junhyung seducing him to his wants. He's such a bamf

Reply

rainbowtongues May 8 2010, 00:20:42 UTC
Aw, they're such sweet people. I almost didn't get to see them, i had to go on a 6hr flight to California. haha

and Yes, he is QUITE bamf haha

Reply


Leave a comment

Up