[Drabble] Home

Sep 29, 2011 16:32

Title: Home
Author: hikarinoniji
Group: Hey!Say!JUMP
Pairing: Nakajima/Okamoto
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: This is purely fiction.
Summary: Keito vividly remembers what life was like when he had just debuted.
A/N: Written for the jekissmeme, tweeked it a little bit because I'm a whiny writer XD

Tadaima )

r: pg, p: yuto/keito, drabble

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I kind of wish I had a yabu icon right now crazyfaucet September 29 2011, 19:32:31 UTC
AH! You! You wrote me my request! O___O Completely not who I imagined at all! You get much MORE love from me now! Thank you!

/will read the tweeked version afterwards!

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Read! crazyfaucet September 30 2011, 03:05:43 UTC
I enjoyed it even more with the editing than i did originally! I loved how you added a line for Yabu and the ending was even cuter!

Thank you! =)

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Re: I kind of wish I had a yabu icon right now hikarinoniji October 3 2011, 19:22:25 UTC
Haha, really? XD Who else did you have in mind? Thank you very much |D I'm glad you liked the tweeked version as well. I felt like there were some things missing and some small mistakes that even I could pick up, haha.

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Re: I kind of wish I had a yabu icon right now crazyfaucet October 3 2011, 19:33:33 UTC
No one else to be honest, I was wracking my brain to see what other European person I knew that wrote. Though, I am glad it was a good discovery ^_^ You're welcome. Now, to go read your entry for jent_remix. =)

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kusumi_koharu September 29 2011, 20:42:55 UTC
omg this was soooooo sweet <3 I love it!

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hikarinoniji October 3 2011, 19:22:50 UTC
Awe, thank you very much for liking it :D ♥

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forever_iceage September 30 2011, 06:19:05 UTC
omg...that was just heart-warming!

Okajima has always been my favourite pairing along with Chiitaro^^

Thanks for a great story:)

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hikarinoniji October 3 2011, 19:24:20 UTC
Awe, thank you very much ;;

As a pairing I've never really given much thought to OkaJima, but to me they have one of the most genuine canon friendships ♥ But I don't mind people seeing this as more than friendship.

No problem!

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aliciaswr September 30 2011, 06:53:02 UTC
ASDLKJASDLKDJAS

This is good. Like really really good.

Yuto is forever the kind dorky boy. <33!

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hikarinoniji October 3 2011, 19:25:08 UTC
asdgfhjkl /keysmashes you back XD

I'm glad you like it so much ;;!!

He is, he's so sweet and cute and... So Yuto!!

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aliciaswr October 3 2011, 21:33:22 UTC
xD ad;laskljad!

Your icon made me smile. xD

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ichigocherry September 30 2011, 09:26:21 UTC
I love this! :D OkaJima <3 <3 <3

Yabu being a tall skinny meanie. >:( (I can't say big fat meanie 'cuz he's not big nor fat.)

Yuto is soooo adorkable!!

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hikarinoniji October 3 2011, 19:26:22 UTC
Thank you very much~

Well, I had to make someone the bad guy. I just figured that being the oldest and their senpai (along with Inoo) Yabu would be frustrated when things wouldn't go his way.

He definitely is!

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ichigocherry October 4 2011, 03:20:47 UTC
You're welcome!

True, true.

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