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writer_klmeri November 18 2011, 21:31:52 UTC
I can't begin to tell you how wonderful this was. I am not a Princess Bride fan, per se, but the way you interwove that storyline with the TOS episode (and expanding upon it YAY!!) had me on the edge of my seat the whole way through. To boot, you gave us a great story-telling perspective! I loved the switch-offs between storytellers and the side comments and subtle realizations on Joanna's part. I think it's safe to say there was something magical about this whole fic. I commend you on your creativity. Thank you!

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rainbowstrlght November 23 2011, 16:09:33 UTC
Thank you so much for reading! Especially since Princess Bride isn't your thing. :D I was dubious about the perspectives when I first started writing it, but I'm glad they turned out, and that you liked them. Joanna was also one of my fave parts of the fic. :)

Thank you so much for your lovely comment. "Magical" is such a compliment, truly. ♥

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sierra_scarlet November 18 2011, 22:15:04 UTC
Oh my gosh, that was the most adorable ending ever! I didn't see the Joanna and Bones moment turning out quite that way, but it was so perfect. That said, I really loved the "spark" metaphor when it came to Jim/Spock, and Joanna's very wise remarks about love. Excellent job, I loved this whole thing and it was certainly worth waiting for the chapters.

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rainbowstrlght November 21 2011, 07:52:51 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the ending and the spark metaphor. :D That ending is really due to my artist, who threatened to stab me in the neck if I changed it from my original. So, it stayed.

Thank you so much for reading, and I especially liked all your comments along the way. ♥

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