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Meet You There [1/?]

Apr 22, 2007 23:31

Title: Meet You There
Pairings: Jaeho, Yoosu
Length: Chapter fic
Author: rainbowpebbles
Rating: PG
Genre: Drama, Humour, Fluff, Angst (not in any particular order)
Summary: Sequel to A World of Colour. Who said that the road after the first kiss would ever be smooth?

A man walked down the street, his shoes tapping lightly on the pavement. The street ( Read more... )

yoosu, jaeho, dbsk, yunjae

Comments 65

uknowandiknow April 22 2007, 15:45:45 UTC

AHH IM FIRST!! shall read then come back!

uknowandiknow April 22 2007, 15:52:36 UTC

AHH! im so happy that i came online to do stupid PW and then to seeyou cos i was feeling REALREALREAL horrid bout tomorrow [pre-monday blues maybe] and then you came and gave me a message of salvation. WHOO! and now you're offline so i cant thank you properly and give you a huge hug for making me feel better.

OH MAN i love the suspense though it's kinda killing me. *nails scratching comp table* i know you'll be busy with school. so...update with care! yes! haha. ok i shall talk to you tomorrow! =))

rainbowpebbles April 22 2007, 15:59:45 UTC

HAHA i AM online you dork (:

yep. school and pw both suck. haha! all the best for your school tomorrow too (: and don't spoil your nails, please. XD

joongielove April 22 2007, 15:55:54 UTC

Awww I'm not first! Save spot

rainbowpebbles April 22 2007, 16:01:25 UTC

aww never mind! haha. the person in front had a head start XD cos we are close friends, and i always tell her when i update my fic. so she's the first to know. usually, anyway ^-^

joongielove April 22 2007, 16:17:32 UTC

He set the sleep, black cell phone on the table,

Is that supposed to be sleek? Idk lol

But other than....

OMFG STALKER!!!!=OOO

rainbowpebbles April 22 2007, 16:19:55 UTC

haha yep, changed the error already! thank you! my mind must have been subconciously thinking about sleep -_____-

yep, stalker dude! ^-^ i thought it would be fun. haha!

thank you for commenting, lots of love <333333

ranalinde April 22 2007, 15:57:40 UTC

Yay! Sequel! ^O^ Hmm...very interesting...I wonder who the mysterious stalker is? Of course, I still have to say how much I love your sense of humour. xDDD

rainbowpebbles April 22 2007, 16:04:28 UTC

haha XD i wonder who he is? *whistles innocently* it was tough writing that whole part without mentioning the name. i haven't quite decided on whether i should use that person i'm thinking of as the stalker yet! hence the stalker shall be anon for now. heee ^-^

there wasn't much humour in this one, i'm sorry! hopefully there will be more in the next chapter, esp with heechul making his first appearance in the the sequel :DDD

thank you for commenting! much love! <333

orionsroad April 22 2007, 16:14:40 UTC

OH MY GAWD, YOU'RE WRITING A STALKER FIC. *spills messy love hearts all over you* ♥♥♥♥♥ I think you mind read. You do, don't you. OISAujoaisd. I was just thinking about the fact that there were no stalking fics. AND YOU WRITE ONE. And it's part of AWOC. *sets up her own stalking regime, for this fic*

Haha... Heecul, as always, is love, even when he's not there. Yoochun's blue crayon and their lack of sophistication despite outward appearances is also love. AND OF COURSE, the Jaeho sweetness is gorgeous love.

(ohemgee, it's not Dongwook, is it...? >_@)

rainbowpebbles April 22 2007, 16:25:44 UTC

HAHA why yes, of course i do! one of my hidden talents so uncommonly used XD

yes, heechul's charisma travels far and wide~ and yoochun's crayon was supposed to be pink, but i decided to give him a more..e-hem. MANLY colour.

is it dong wook? frankly...it's not really concrete on who the stalker is. i'm planning to read the reactions of the readers first before i make the final decision. haha! you can plead on dong wook's behalf though! maybe i'll scratch his name off my list. i feel sorry for him, actually. he's been given bad, bad roles in fics ever since the fateful XMAN ep 5. HAHA ^-^

orionsroad April 22 2007, 16:30:43 UTC

XP I was thinking of doing a real-world DBSK stalking fic, but I think I'd like yours better. :D

You know the funny thing? I don't like Heechul in real life. I find him a little bit creepy. ^^; But I love him in AWOC. ^^; AND DUDE, CHUNNIE WAS MADE FOR THE PINK. Chun isn't a man, he's a cleverly disguised cute floofy bunny. XD

lol... the only reason I don't want it to be Dongwook is because yeah, he has been giving the ikky end of the stick in the Jaeho fandom (I'm guilty of it too... >_<) and I really have nothing against him! Poor guy deserves a break. Maybe he can be a friendly waiter at Jae's resteraunt or some other such innocuous role, rather then slihgtly!creepy-but-more-sad-really stalker dood.

rainbowpebbles April 23 2007, 12:55:35 UTC

i think i have an idea of who to use as the stalker. haha! maybe his name will be mentioned in the next chapter, if he has an appearance (: i have decided not to torture se7en anymore!

whyyyyy not~ heechul is such a sweetie pie XD Yoochun's Pink Bunny Man!! don't mess with him.

^-^

chaosmyth April 22 2007, 16:31:00 UTC

YOU'RE BACK WITH THE SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hugs*

:DDDDDD

I can't wait to see how the plot will develop...it sounds very promising. :D And the JaeHo is ♥. And YooSuMinHo are lovely dorks as usual and make me laugh like an idiot every time. XDDDD

♥

rainbowpebbles April 23 2007, 12:57:38 UTC

yes, i'm back to torture you guys more XDDD

i'm glad the plot sounds promising ^-^ it took me AGES to formulate something out of my uncreative brain. this time the plot is more well-thought through than AWoC, so hopefully it won't be so predictable.

glad you loved the jaeho, and the yoosuminho! (what a mouthful!) stay tuned for the next chapter, dear! <333