Hunger - Chapter2

[rainbowjumpsuit]

So I don't feel like facing real life and writing about mine, so I guess I'm just channeling through some Cam!angst still. Would love it if someone would R&R. I'm actually not hating every word I write this time.

Cameron fiddled with the clasp of her wristwatch. She checked the time again. Eight-thirty. No one was in the office yet, it had only

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[apophantic]

LOVE IT. the dialogue, the stragetic use of quotes, the story itself... the ending was particularly excellent.

please keep going! this is great work. :) but you know I think that already...lol

[roobyroobyroo]

I love this hon. Cam's emotional state is so fragile and her feeling so raw that i am almost afraid for her. I love how it is developing though, that House is concerned for her, but won't come out and say it, instead going to get the bagels - a very House thing to do.

I love this:

numbers, number numbers. She hated them more and more lately. Numbers on her scale - not going down quick enough. Numbers on her clock - how much time since she'd seen him? Until she'd see him again? How many more hours would she have to endure sleepless, in her bed, before the day began again. Minutes - how many she'd run on the treadmil. Miles - the same.

Ooh gotta run - House is about to start!!! But i Loved the fic!!

[rainbowjumpsuit]

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you're liking it so far!

[houseketeer]

WHOA. This ch. is even better than the last. I have no time to comment, must read on!