I really enjoyed this story, and I think the both of them are cute together in any way possible. So I'd like to thank you for writing and posting this wonderful story, well yeah, that's pretty much all I wanted to say... :)
Dude. Seriously? I know this is unbeta-ed, but you can at least give it a casual read-through to catch the more than five GLARING spelling errors I saw (and no, I wasn't counting).
Also. I don't know what season Ziva this is, but the way you have her talk is just not her, except maybe in her first (two) episode(s).
Furthermore. If one drinks TWO DOZEN shots of tequila in one night, one is DEAD. Believe me, I'm a medical professional. I know. Unless it's watered down >50%, which would be a plain old rip-off. On top of that, what are they? Freaking alcoholics?
And before you burn me for flaming: this is such a bad effort, it doesn't even deserve a flame. Fire is too good for it.
Wow...you seriously need a life. THIS? Is fanfiction. THIS IS THE INTERNET. Have you nothing better to do in your life than troll the internet looking for stories to trash? I am perfectly happy to recieve constructive criticism, but you didn't opt for that. You are completely tactless person who apprently needs to get out a little more or at least get laid
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I appreciate the apology. To me, when I write a fic, as long as I'm happy with it I don't really care what others think. That doesn't mean I'm not open to concrit however, just that I write for me more than I write to please others.
Thanks - about my girlfriend.
As far as your suggestion for giving it a readover, I did. Twice. I was just so tired and stressed I missed a few things.
Anyway, sounds like we both have had a rough few days, so what do you say we just let byegones be byegones?
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So I'd like to thank you for writing and posting this wonderful story, well yeah, that's pretty much all I wanted to say... :)
Hope you have a nice day,
take care,
-Mel.
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Also. I don't know what season Ziva this is, but the way you have her talk is just not her, except maybe in her first (two) episode(s).
Furthermore. If one drinks TWO DOZEN shots of tequila in one night, one is DEAD. Believe me, I'm a medical professional. I know. Unless it's watered down >50%, which would be a plain old rip-off.
On top of that, what are they? Freaking alcoholics?
And before you burn me for flaming: this is such a bad effort, it doesn't even deserve a flame. Fire is too good for it.
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I'm sorry about the shit with your gf. Sucks. Honestly. I hope she gets better.
Here's a tip for you: next time, give a fic a little once-over before you post it. Prevents a lot of shit like this.
True though, I was tactless. Long day, long week, no reason to take it out on you. Sorry.
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Thanks - about my girlfriend.
As far as your suggestion for giving it a readover, I did. Twice. I was just so tired and stressed I missed a few things.
Anyway, sounds like we both have had a rough few days, so what do you say we just let byegones be byegones?
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I'm glad you enjoyed that part! Thanks for reading!
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