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Yep, it's been a while. I have written a new story for you all. I kinda put the Eternal Sunshine fic on the backburner and have returned to other fandoms. I wrote a Daria femmeslash piece entitled "Freezerburn." Hope you enjoy it

Comments

[pariahcub]

Excellent! I can see the image of Daria and Jane in the freezer, only their breath and eyes visible.

[punky_bruusterr]

Thanks a bunch! Glad to know this fic is Daria-fan approved :) (well, I certainly approve of it myself as a Daria fan, but feedback is always good).

[sour_sweets]

good fan fic!yay for daria and jane!

[punky_bruusterr]

Thank you very much :) Yay for Daria and Jane indeed

[femme_slash_fan]

Very good.

[punky_bruusterr]

Thanks much :)

[etalia]

I like this quite a bit. You've got Daria's dialogue down pat. That's not something I've seen many other fan fic writers get right. Also, the reason why Jane has been avoiding Daria is plausible and straightforward.

I think the scene with Daria, Jake, and Helen can be extended. While Helen took her daughter by surprise, I think Daria would be a little faster on her feet than to stumble on where her "internship" is.

Will there be more of this? Not only Daria and Jane, er, keeping each other warm in the freezer, but also the last scene with Quinn where Daria doesn't come out hints that there could be a sequel. If so, I'm looking forward to it.

[punky_bruusterr]

Wow, thanks for the compliments. I also appreciate the constructive criticism. I actually am thinking about working off of this and making a sequel since I left so much stuff hanging in the air. I don't know when I'll get to it, but hopefully before the end of June the next part will be up. Thanks again and I'll let you know!

[thesaurosie]

aha awesome

[punky_bruusterr]

thank you very mucho miss roboto :P