Fragments

Nov 24, 2009 21:13

Title: Fragments
Rating: PG
Summary: They all have fragments of her, their own personal Elle.
Prompt: For sylelle_100. "I always thought that if none of your family or friends knew you were dead, then it's like not really being dead. People can invent the best and the worst for you."

They all have fragments of her. The parts they remember ( Read more... )

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di_elle November 25 2009, 01:14:12 UTC
I like this! random though: the Haitian is the only one who really care for Elle among all those people. And Sylar, yes. what if...

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rain_sunsets November 25 2009, 17:52:01 UTC
Yeah I feel like the Haitian is the only one who would remotely care or wonder what happened to her.

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stainofmylove November 25 2009, 05:49:18 UTC
Very nice, you say a lot in just one sentence both about the characters (by what sticks with him) and Elle (the details). Great interpretation of the prompt!

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rain_sunsets November 25 2009, 17:52:14 UTC
Thanks so much, glad you like it :)

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rain_sunsets November 25 2009, 17:52:56 UTC
Thanks, I thought they would all remember her in different ways.

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disalae November 25 2009, 18:48:20 UTC
I really like how you took multiple people and gave their views and feelings on Elle. I really like the Haitian's part. You really fit a lot into 100 words, great job :D

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quirkysmuse November 27 2009, 12:56:53 UTC
Very nice. I loved seeing everyone else's point of view on Elle. Great job.

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