Heroes Big Boom

[rain_sunsets]

Chapter 5

“Its Mohinder he needs your help!”

“What happened?”

“His locker was searched and they’ve found all the exam papers”

“What can I do?”

Elle didn’t want to do anything, she wanted to go home and eat her body weight in ice cream and cry about the fact that a bitchy girl managed to ruin her relationship. But it was Mohinder and she would do

Comments

[ashedrake]

That was very sweet! Congratz on being an official Big Boom author:D

[rain_sunsets]

Thans :D

[dream_infinity0]

this was a really excellent story

great work

[togsos]

very cute....

[takhallus]

I really love your story and the way you weave in bits of the characters' personalities from canon, it's really awesome.

One thing, you might want to get your beta reader to go over this one more time because there are still quite a few spelling and punctuation errors and your dialogue isn't formatted right which means sometimes it can be hard to see who's saying what.

Congrats on making to the end of Big Boom! This is a great High School AU, one of the best I've read x

[rain_sunsets]

Thanks, next time I do one I'll try and find someone to beta it.

[catyuy]

Cute and Sweet.