In Our Bedroom After the War

[rain_sunsets]

Written for thedark_fest, prompt : Harry Potter, grown up Harry/Ginny, possibly Harry/others, The not-so-happy reality of marrying your childhood sweetheart

In Our Bedroom After The War

What the history books never mention is the aftermath of war, Harry thought. Sure they’re the odd chapter on how the town or country rebuilt itself but not much on

Comments

[hereticalvision]

Wow. I really enjoyed your depiction of all the crack that started to show in the various relationships Harry has- I loved the Ginny/Tom reference and the way Harry is different with her, Hermione and Cho. You really evoked a strong sense of despair and confusion. The onlt thing I would say is that there were some errors in grammar which detracted a little from the whole. But otherwise this was a deliciously dark piece of writing. Well done.

[rain_sunsets]

Thanks Im happy you liked it. Grammar is a big weakness of mine and I didnt have time to get in beta'd glad you enjoyed it anyway.

[rain_sunsets]

Thanks so much. I always thought the book epilogue was just a bit to cheerful :).