[FANFIC] Lucid Memories 12/20

[rain_sonata]

Title: Lucid Memories 
Author/Artist: Rain_Sonata
Character(s) or Pairing(s): America/England/America or US/UK/US
Rating: PG-13, might raise up later
Warnings: boy love, occasional swearing, confusion of what's happening, long chapter, hints of the existence of state-tans
Summary: Rev!America is brought back to the present, replacing the current

Comments

[hoshiko2]

As always, enjoying this series. For some reason, I didn't know the other two chapters had gone up, hence my lack of comment. Sorry.

But, if I may say, sometimes your grammar flies out the window and it's hard to read. You switch from past to present words and omitt some words or even repeat some. If at all possible, when you finish, try editing it up to tidy it up some more?

Other than that, I love the series. :3

[kasumicc]

Hmm, nice to see England having this kind of talk with Alfred. I wonder how this knowledge can affect history, though! xD

a picture for you...I had done

[moon_hitomi]

As my schoolwork is pretty hard,I can't always read your new chapter at first time,but I am sure to keep paying close attention to your fanfiction!
I had drawn a picture for this fanfic,but for the reason I don't have enough time and my scanner is not on hand,so I just take a photo of it use my father's mobile phone.I know the picture is too small,so next time I will use scanner to scan it!Nervous as I am...please tell me your feeling about it~
http://moon-hitomi.livejournal.com/1553.html

Re: a picture for you...I had done

[rain_sonata]

My updates will definitely be slower since I have school again. Math isn't being nice to me TT_TT.

I love your drawing. It looks so nice! Way better than what I could do. For some reason, if I draw anime, I don't really try much and it ends up looking crappy. I admit. I can't draw guys. I really can't. Why are guys so hard to draw TTATT? I can only draw things if it's right in front of me. I can not draw without reference.

America looks so happy ending that giant hamburger there. America! Stop eating so much! XD. Seeing the two Alfreds eating their burgers just made me smile. Funny how Alfred looked so young back than before he needed glasses. People look so young without them.

Good luck with school! Somehow, I have a feeling that this won't be an easy year for a lot of us.