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Sunrise Ranch, October 9, 1904

Mar 02, 2011 08:32

Title: Sunrise Ranch, October 9, 1904
Author: Raikana Sakaro
Rating: NC-17
Characters: Alfred, Matthew, and Francis.
Warnings: This is an AU in early Edwardian Montana, near the Canada/US border. Human names used because they are human. PORN AND FIGHTING.
Summary: Matthew is a farmhand who finds work on Alfred's horse ranch, and ends up falling in love ( Read more... )

story: sunrise ranch, fanfic, character: america/alfred, character: france/francis, series: hetalia, character: canada/matthew

Comments 3

karinablue_rose March 2 2011, 16:18:49 UTC

Wow!Awesome chapter.I find it interesting that Francis is being a prude here when we all know that he is more likely to be encouraging of such behavior in canon.And the sex between Matthew and Alfred is totally hot!

raikana_sakaro March 2 2011, 16:23:13 UTC

Yeah...this has probably gone beyond the realm of feasibility... It was probably doomed to fail when trying to reconcile Pervert and Victorian Almost-Catholic...

hideincarnate March 2 2011, 23:24:04 UTC

There were some errors (spelling I think of one word, and then absence of some words in sentences) but besides that, it's not a bad chapter!

I understand how you feel about it not feeling quite right. I was half expecting to read at the end "And Matthew woke up only to find out it was a dream."

I'm still glad you shared it with us though!