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[raggedyanndy]

Hey, everyone! So, I went home for the weekend two weeks ago for a family reunion, and then TRAINING happened, so that whole wfmad thing I was doing? Yeah, not so much. HOWEVER.

I have decided to reread the whole of the Harry Potter series right through - I'm already three chapters into Chamber of Secrets, and I just started last night! In

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[bara_rei]

Read a lot of HP fanfic in my day, and this story is really good. Could use a bit of work on some of the emotions when they're outside of dialogue, for example this passage "Jo had trouble concentrating because she felt that the great, invisible wall that divided the real world and the magical world she’d created had been breached. It was as if her two lives had somehow become fused and everything had been turned upside down" is too much tell and not enough show, so to speak. But seriously, LOVED it :)