Comments | ragelikeafire: The path not taken

ragelikeafire

The path not taken

Apr 29, 2009 21:38

Author: ragelikeafire
Rating: pg-13
Pairing: Jacqueline / Miranda
Status: Complete

Disclaimer: I do not own nothing, not even my sanity.
Summary: A glimpse into Miranda’s past. Why do Miranda and Jacqueline supposedly hate each other? When did it all start?
A/N: This is for my gorgeous acceb23, happy birthday! You know how I feel about MP&JF so this is to show you ( Read more... )

title: the path not taken, author: ragelikeafire, all: fiction, rating: pg-13

Comments 14

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ragelikeafire May 1 2009, 11:32:17 UTC

Im so pleased you like it!

Hate sex sounds delicious *ponders*

I hope you had a great day and gots lots and lots of pressies :)

H x

lefevre April 30 2009, 22:16:43 UTC

Ahh, that roses line still gets to me. Who would have thought that MP's also a closet poet? Lol, I totally agree with acceb23 about a follow up with hate!sex. And then Andy finds out and Miranda and Andy should have fabulous hate!sex themselves. So. Perfect. Rawr. XD

ragelikeafire May 1 2009, 11:34:38 UTC

Now that would be one f'd up triangle! But the thought really does funny things to my girl parts!

Thanks for reading again bb x

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ragelikeafire May 3 2009, 10:31:51 UTC

Good spot on the Connie! :)

You picked up on some of the most important parts in the story for me. I wanted to give the reader into a younger Miranda, to show a more open side. How time and stature has caused her-already wary and guarded side to grow, almost to a point where she is unable to let anyone in, a fear of the consequences.

My intention was for the reader to interpret the apology one of two ways:

In the film Miranda admits that she knew what Irv was up to all along. Is Miranda playing a vicious game with Jacqueline when she sends the note? Or after twenty years of regrets and lies is she genuinely remorseful over how she treated her?

Thanks for reading bb!

glacial_pace May 5 2009, 17:30:02 UTC

I absolutely loved this! I was sceptical about the pairing - but wow, it was great - a very hot couple I think, a wall I would very much like to be a fly on!

ragelikeafire May 5 2009, 17:49:04 UTC

Thanks for the comment :)

Not my first choice pairing but because it was a gift I was willing to step outside of my comfort zone for my darling acceb23 :)

nice to see a new face too!