Comments | ragefist02: Requiem for the Unforgiven

ragefist02

Requiem for the Unforgiven

Jan 06, 2006 18:36

Controversial is my specialty. The lengthier the better:

Requiem for the Unforgiven

An abrupt clang of chains,
I cringe.
The Father reads my last rites,
shame drags my focus downward. Elbows to knees ( Read more... )

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robertlyon January 9 2006, 04:13:14 UTC

you should plant roses in my garden

ragefist02 January 11 2006, 15:02:22 UTC

Sorry, I don't swoon.

robertlyon January 11 2006, 19:03:42 UTC

Basically I was trying to compliment you because I read through the little you have of a journal and found you interesting, and that's your response? Lame.

ragefist02 January 12 2006, 02:10:40 UTC

I apologize for coming off like an a**hole. Though I was unable to read your entries I read some of your feedback and left that response to let you know I wasn't planning to become one of your drooling groupies. It was generous of you to leave such feedback for me, obviously you are a writer of some talent, and for you to appreciate my own writing is flattering. Especially when mine is relatively pointless. So, thank you.

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