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Breaking Points - Chapter Seven

Jun 04, 2009 21:01

Title: Breaking Points
Author: Ragdoll
Pairing: Kirk/Spock Pre-slash, mentions of Spock/Uhura
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine, more's the pity.

Summary: When the Enterprise is asked to transport Vulcan colonists to their new home, Spock Prime comes with them. His presence changes everything - and leads to life-altering revelations for Jim and Spock ( Read more... )

star trek, breaking points, fanfic

Comments 95

aisalynn June 5 2009, 04:49:01 UTC

Yay! You updated! *dances* I just started reading this story this morning and I am in love with it! One of my favorite things about the new movie was that we got to see the beginning of all the character's relationships with each other (something I was always sad we didn't get to see in the actual show) and this story is exactly how I would want their relationship to develop. I love it! And yay for nine chapters!

ragdoll987 June 7 2009, 04:17:57 UTC

I'm glad it's working for you! You're so lucky, I love it when I catch a WIP as it's getting close to the end, that way I get to enjoy it pretty much all at once.. :)

briteskies June 5 2009, 04:53:44 UTC

Oh, I really just adore this story! ♥

You've built it up so well!

ragdoll987 June 7 2009, 04:18:04 UTC

Thank you!

_sin_attract June 5 2009, 04:54:22 UTC

Nine chapters? Hooray!

Great update as always, I love Kirk's interaction with both Spock Prime and First Officer Spock, they are both so great and well written. I loved their dinner scene together and their progressing friendship.

ragdoll987 June 7 2009, 04:18:37 UTC

It's been really interesting finding a balance between both relationships that fits in with their divergent characters. Tons of fun!

peapods42 June 5 2009, 05:01:48 UTC

Every new chapter I have to do a little dance in my chair. Absolutely wonderful, as always. Comical and heart-breaking and heart-warming. I can't wait for the rest.

ragdoll987 June 7 2009, 04:19:08 UTC

Heart-breaking and heart-warming all in one - I know I did exactly what I wanted to with this chapter then! :-D

ooohhh this is excellent anonymous June 5 2009, 05:08:05 UTC

I have to admit to a thrill every time I see you post! The dynamics just work. I also have to admit I love your Kirk- I think many people forget that as adolescent as he may act even Pike looking at his bloodied up face said he was a genius. Keep writing- you're lovely.

Re: ooohhh this is excellent ragdoll987 June 7 2009, 04:19:50 UTC

Yeah. One of the things I miss in the 'new' Kirk is that he's not always shown to the best of his character, so I'm having fun exploring him here.