SPN Fic: The Wellington Fort (Part 3/3)

[rafikiven]

Hi, been having a lot of trouble posting this and have done a lot of cutting and pasting.  I've read through it, but if u see anything wonky plz let me know!

Title: The Wellington Fort
Category: Gen, pre-series

Rating: PG-13 to R (for subject matter and language)

Characters: Dean, Sam, John
Summary: The way Dean told it that summer was the best of their

Comments

[lori_leaf]

Aw, of course Dean would destroy the thing he built because he was upset at himself and the world in general. This isn't my personal canon for John, but it is an interesting possibility to explore. Great job writing a really heartbreaking piece through Sam's eyes.

[rafikiven]

Thank you for the feedback. Oh, and I've started a Fox 'verse story. When I'm done, would you mind taking a look at it?

[lori_leaf]

I'd love to! Do you have my email address?

[rafikiven]

Nope, but mine is rafikiven at gmail dot com. I dunno why ppl write email addresses like that anyway, but it must be a good reason so I'll copy them.

Send me an email and I'll send it to u when it's done--really not sure when that'll be yet!

[mymuseandi]

Ok, this must be one of those few fics where i really feel like punching John in the face, and then kick him in the shins, and any other thing i could think of for treating Sam and especially Dean that way!

[kokoda2007]

Horribly perfect, if that makes sense. Although I feel John loved the boys, they must have had a far from normal/ideal childhood. This makes me want to kick him for being so blind to his sons.

Well done! And as always, thank you for sharing.

[rafikiven]

Thanks. I was quite horrible to everyone in this fic...heehee, sometimes I feel a little evil.

[pinkphoenix1985]

excellent!

[specialagentldy]

Oh my. This story just breaks my heart. The part at the end with Dean ripping the fort down. Ouch. You did such a good job of building up the fort being a place for Dean to go to for fun and safty, and comfort. Him ripping it down in the end just hurts.

[rafikiven]

Thank you. This was actually a fic where I wrote the end first. I knew I wanted to write an abusive John fic, but I also had this picture in my mind of Dean destroying something he loved (like with the Impala in 2.2). That then morphed into the scene with Sam looking at the destroyed fort as they drive past and Dean acting like nothing happened.