SPN Fic: The Wellington Fort (Part 2/3)

[rafikiven]

Title: The Wellington Fort
Category: Gen, pre-series

Rating: PG-13

Characters: Dean, Sam, John
Summary: The way Dean told it that summer was the best of their lives.  For Sam, it was the summer he stopped believing in heroes.  9-year-old Sam and 13-year-old Dean.

Warnings: Swearing.  Themes of child abuse.  Hurt Dean

Word Count:  1560 (this section)

Comments

[pinkphoenix1985]

excellent!

[rafikiven]

Thanks

[just_ruth]

This is well written and starkly realistic. I have the urge to smack John upside the head and yell "Look at what you're doing!"

[rafikiven]

Thanks for reading! Honored to hear you thought it was well written and realistic. Yes, the John in this story might be better off with a couple of good smacks on the head.

[kokoda2007]

Makes me want to take Dean away and hug him.

"Had Dad said “this is for your own good” and calmly hit Dean across the face? Sam doubted it.'"

Just so sad, but I adore the Sam and Dean relationship you portray.

[rafikiven]

Ikes, that's a part I added after the beta--hope it worked!

[mymuseandi]

His eyes burned and his heart thumped. “No, that’s stupid! Why can’t Dean have it if I can? We’re sorry we were slow. Dean’s sorry!”

My eyes were burning as well. it always grate me when Dean got hit but Sam didn't, and that John always put more on Dean and not Sam.

Excellent story. i can't wait for the ending. :p

[rafikiven]

Yeah, sorry, I made the John in this story something of a meanie. I love John and all, but I really think he might have been this way at times. There are many faces of "John" in my head.

Anyway, glad you're enjoying it. I expect to get the final part posted tomorrow.

[bookie1289]

Oh I am hooked! Can't wait for more!!

[rafikiven]

Great!