I don't even know where to begin..smiller03_9February 27 2008, 19:55:10 UTC
This will be an all-encompassing post. I printed the parts out and sat down and read it and I still can't get over how good it is. Total mindfuck
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Thoughts, Part 2
anonymous
February 27 2008, 20:10:42 UTC
Now of course I wonder about Part 8. How does one really set things up so we can say goodbye to them at the end? You have quite the challenge ahead of you :-)
I mean here is Radu and Michelle, plus the bitten Becky. I can't see Becky being OK with being a Vampire.. then again, was Nicolescu a good guy ala Stefan? If I was Michelle I'd be just like I'm done, Radu. I can't do it. The carnage I've caused is too great. Just end it. OR Michelle should just do it. Or have Mel come back and do it for her.
But, sadly, to see what happens in Part 8 that means the series is over and that will make me sad. :-(
Re: Thoughts, Part 2memoriamvictusFebruary 28 2008, 08:18:15 UTC
I'm so glad it lived up to expectations! You bring up a lot of interesting points that I'd love to discuss, but, well... I'm afraid you shall have to wait and see; I don't know if the ending is going to have people cheering or wanting to throttle me. :) I'm just sorry I couldn't squeeze Marin in for you!
Wow... amazing chapter! Hopefully in the next one we'll get more Radu/Michelle interactions! Like I've said... it's really no lie that I would like this to end happily (or as good as it can possibly be) for Radu haha.
I agree... I don't know how I feel about becky being a vampire either... she always kind of got in the way in my opinion... but I am sure there is a good reason for it! Your story is so amazing... I'm kind of sad that chapter eight is going to be the last chapter :-(... I hope you continue to write on subspecies in the future! This made my day!
Thank you! That's one of my favorite moments in subspecies... Anders Hove hit that right on!
I was always thinking after reading this... how GLAD I am that Dr. Nicolescu got his... I mean, he totally had it coming they way he tried to go against Michelle and Radu... I also love how Radu was offended that the Dr. would try to use Michelle as 'chattle' it just shows that he at least has some sort of value of her.
Also... I enjoy the fact that Radu further complimented Michelle by saying that the Dr wouldn't have been able to take Michelle on his own because she is already more powerful than he is.
I can't wait for chapter 8... even if Radu doesn't get Michelle... I can always continue imagining :-P haha
"You are young yet, to fear such a one as this; one who could never have held you had you not been delivered unto him." Swoon! That was such a great line.
I have to believe that Michelle and Radu will have some kind of moderately happy ending. Something good has to happen to Michelle.. right? right? lol
as long as this dose not end with my favorite dead you will be gold.. This should have been the 4th film and I hope you do more after this is done ,They are very very very very very very very very very very very well done! ever think of doing writing other then fic,, go look at my info on LJ I work for some places you could be published.
I've actually had some limited success professionally, but as most of my work is short horror, it's getting harder and harder to find markets these days. Then, too, writing is a hobby for me; I am one of the rare few that loves their day job, so I don't want to lose the joy of storytelling in the rush of chasing after deadlines and trying to amortize. I just go where the stories are, regardless of whether they're original or fannish.
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I mean here is Radu and Michelle, plus the bitten Becky. I can't see Becky being OK with being a Vampire.. then again, was Nicolescu a good guy ala Stefan? If I was Michelle I'd be just like I'm done, Radu. I can't do it. The carnage I've caused is too great. Just end it. OR Michelle should just do it. Or have Mel come back and do it for her.
But, sadly, to see what happens in Part 8 that means the series is over and that will make me sad. :-(
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I agree... I don't know how I feel about becky being a vampire either... she always kind of got in the way in my opinion... but I am sure there is a good reason for it! Your story is so amazing... I'm kind of sad that chapter eight is going to be the last chapter :-(... I hope you continue to write on subspecies in the future! This made my day!
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and I am there with you on Becky. Definitely got in the way.
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I was always thinking after reading this... how GLAD I am that Dr. Nicolescu got his... I mean, he totally had it coming they way he tried to go against Michelle and Radu... I also love how Radu was offended that the Dr. would try to use Michelle as 'chattle' it just shows that he at least has some sort of value of her.
Also... I enjoy the fact that Radu further complimented Michelle by saying that the Dr wouldn't have been able to take Michelle on his own because she is already more powerful than he is.
I can't wait for chapter 8... even if Radu doesn't get Michelle... I can always continue imagining :-P haha
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I have to believe that Michelle and Radu will have some kind of moderately happy ending. Something good has to happen to Michelle.. right? right? lol
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and this so should have been 4!!
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This should have been the 4th film and I hope you do more after this is done ,They are very very very very very very very very very very very well done!
ever think of doing writing other then fic,,
go look at my info on LJ I work for some places you could be published.
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I've actually had some limited success professionally, but as most of my work is short horror, it's getting harder and harder to find markets these days. Then, too, writing is a hobby for me; I am one of the rare few that loves their day job, so I don't want to lose the joy of storytelling in the rush of chasing after deadlines and trying to amortize. I just go where the stories are, regardless of whether they're original or fannish.
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