Subspecies: Bloodpact - Chapter Three, part two

Sep 26, 2006 06:47

Subspecies: Bloodpact
Chapter 3/? (probably 8)
Author: memoriamvictusRating: NC-17 ( Read more... )

bloodpact, memoriamvictus, fanfic

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melsmarsh September 26 2006, 18:50:08 UTC
This is very nice, but you should know you seem to have a code error.

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memoriamvictus September 27 2006, 01:18:51 UTC
...eep. Talk about the kingdom being lost for want of a nail - that'll teach me to scan the first few pages and assume everything is okay! I'm sorry that you had to wade through all that garbage, and honored that you did--that was miserable!

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melsmarsh September 27 2006, 01:42:30 UTC
Its ok! I don't mind the error. :)

Radu gave me a little Romanian practice so I'm happy. :)

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amara_dark_rose November 13 2006, 20:16:26 UTC
I love the interaction between Radu & Michelle in this chapter, especially during the "hunting" scene.

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memoriamvictus November 14 2006, 01:22:35 UTC
Thanks! The sheer pathos of the dynamic between those two was really what elevated the films above common schlock, so it's a real pleasure to hear I'm at least within nodding distance of it.

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morelinde December 29 2008, 09:57:04 UTC
that sucks. not your chapter, that was A++++. I mean what happened to her fledgling and how it made her feel. Poor Michelle. Radu should've explained before she started what would happen if she didn't finish the guy off. his fault.

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