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Believe, Chapter 6

Jan 21, 2011 23:04

Title: Believe 6/?
Pairing: JaeMin
Rating: R
Genre: fantasy/romance/a wee bit of angst.
Length: chaptered
For: anihimesama
Summary: Jaejoong's just working a job, clearing a forest for a new city to be built. But what he finds is more than just the tranquility of nature; what happens when he's pulled into a world that he's been helping destroy? If it sounds sort ( Read more... )

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shinchul303 January 21 2011, 14:38:30 UTC

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shinchul303 January 21 2011, 15:00:06 UTC

You express Jaejoong's internal p&s so eloquently. And now we're getting a glimpse of Changmin too, as he incrementally shifts sides.

Your introduction of Yunho as replacement antagonist is smooth technique.

I look forward to update seven in time for next week's class ;)

radioheading January 21 2011, 15:19:58 UTC

You ninja, you :)

I'm glad you're liking it. I don't think Yunho's going to stay an antagonist for long, but I think unconsciously I didn't want to give Jaejoong such an easy ride, you know? Like, Oh, ok, Changmin's on his side? BAM--that means everyone is.

Jaejoong's got to earn his friends here :)

And my <3 to you, as always, for taking the time to read and comment. Hopefully you'll have two stories to read for next week--Silhouettes is trying to write itself at this point!

shinchul303 January 21 2011, 15:25:42 UTC

Another chapter of Silhouettes would be fantastic--Silhouettes AND Believe would be an embarrassment of riches.

Thank you so much for your writing!

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whatifgirl86 January 22 2011, 03:51:49 UTC

So now we know why Changmin hates humans. You really described what Jaejoong was feeling and Jaemin found a connection with each other, which was good. Another good chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next:D

radioheading January 22 2011, 06:04:45 UTC

Changmin's story will get even clearer, so stay tuned for that. And I love writing their connection because they're both so stubborn! Making them each crumble, bit by bit is the best part for me :)

jaceni January 22 2011, 05:42:10 UTC

And so more questions are answered. :) The story is progressing nicely. You even added more characters into the mix and more things were clarified. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

radioheading January 22 2011, 06:07:18 UTC

Thanks, hopefully I'll be updating soon! And thank you also for seconding Shinchul's waaay too nice comment :)

abcdefghiluvyou January 24 2011, 02:58:13 UTC

I only saw your update now :(
I LOVED this chapter. I feel like
someone just embraced me with warm
and gentle arms :)

this is so dreamy and beautiful. like
every word I read out loud and breathed
into the nightly darkness of my room
lightened up the air around me<3

Ilu<333 :)

radioheading January 24 2011, 13:47:46 UTC

I really don't deserve the heaping praise you put on me. Honestly, it's reviews like this that just make me want to write more because how can I not crave such lovely, kind words?

Thank you so much! I'll be updating Silhouettes first, prob later this week so I hope you'll like it!

and ilu moooore :)

crimson_miharu January 30 2011, 19:00:15 UTC

I hadn't realized I had fallen behind in this story until I saw your update for another story >.<.I think I still need to go back and reread this from the beginning if I can ever settle my mind enough to do it. I just read the last two chapters and my heart broke for Jae and for Changmin as well. Reading the part at the beginning of this chapter where Jae is mourning for his mother all over again broke me heart and at the end where Changmin confesses to Jae basically why his hatred for humans runs so deep with confession of humans killing his parents, it all becomes so clear why Min did what he did to Jaejoong in the beginning...

Now I'm off to begin reading Silhouettes, been meaning to read that one for a while :D