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"Calling in a Favor"(Wanna let me know what you think? I've got a
forum for talking about things.)
I am so determined this weekend to get everything in the mail that needs mailing. *Generally made of failure in regards to correspondence.* I
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-Matt
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I liked Jack's resentment of David's popularity. That seems totally natural and befitting, and also gives this story some genuine conflict. (Since things seem to go so easy for David.) And when they end up bein' total BFFs, it'll make that relationship so much more satisfying by contrast. =)
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I felt that some of the violence was over the top. The sex...I didn't mind so much. I appreciated that it was so awkward about it. When Laurie and Dan (successfully) make love, there's a kind of ridiculous quality to it that I think is really right. But at the same time, as dumb as they look, it's beautiful, too, because of all that it represents--their, uh...ya know, achieving a moment of climax in their lives in general...and there's a kind of foolishness to it ( ... )
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