Memory of Mirrors * Chapter Two

Mar 13, 2010 14:34

Memory of Mirrors
Rating: R
Pairing: Asch x Luke (Much later.)
Summary: Having to choose between his duties to Akzeriuth and finding out more about the twin he’s suddenly been confronted with, Luke chooses to pursue Asch instead, and ends up finding out more than he wanted sooner than he should have. Just how will his fate and the fate of ( Read more... )

tales of the abyss, memory of mirrors

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rokujinshouasch March 13 2010, 21:51:43 UTC
Wahhh! Darn you for leaving this at a cliff hanger! I was already on the edge of my seat, but it was just getting to the ridiculously-good part and then- nothing! So cruel to make us wait for the next amazing chapter!

Anyhow. XD I love where this is going! And I'm so proud of Luke for pushing himself this far. He's such a little trooper. ; ; <3 You sure know how to build up my excitement with these stories and then make me worry. I can only imagine what Van did to Asch's fon slots, but I sure hope he can figure it out in time to warn Luke. TT

Love this story so much! And even if the relationship between Asch and Luke isn't the most healthy one, I just adore their interactions as you write them. <333 Thank you for this, it was a wonderful surprise!

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skyla_doragono March 13 2010, 23:01:19 UTC
I've been watching the Abyss anime recently; you can blame the cliff hangers on both this chapter and the My Place chapter on that. XD

I'm trying to portray Luke a bit stronger a bit faster than he is in the game/anime/whatever, but he's going to be clinging to Asch a little more. I hope that makes some sense without revealing too much.

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rokujinshouasch March 14 2010, 03:13:55 UTC
*nod* I could definitely understand that from how you wrote Luke, so it all makes perfect sense to me. |D Sense that has me giddy for more. <3

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