W00T -- FIC! SPN, Fractured, PG-13 (1/1)

[radge_one]

Title: Fractured
Author: Curt Kenobi
Fandom: Supernatural {post-'Swan Song' 5x22}
Genre: Angst. Canon-ish and gen for this part, but a lead-in for AU/AR - canon-change and Dean/Cas preslash.
Word Count: 1502
Summary: post-'Swan Song' - Dean doesn't go to Lisa, at least not right away. No, there's too much that he doesn't want to face that's coming up on

Comments

[dawnintheforest]

I would read more!

[radge_one]

Thank you!

[borgmama1of5]

*crying*

I feel every stab of Dean's pain here.

[radge_one]

*offers tissue*

Thank you. I find Dean post-5.22 just too painful and hurt good not to explore.

[twirlycurls]

This is excellent, I can hardly believe it's your first SPN story. I've love to read more of it and really hope you decide to continue.

Dean's voice and his pain here are so clear that parts of it are difficult to read -- and that's a good thing. :)

"Quiet. …Quiet like that awful moment the ground sealed after Sam-with-Lucifer-as-co-pilot and Michael-wearing-Adam had fallen into the cage. The quiet like that instant of a moment Sam - his Sam, Sammy - had looked him in the eye…."
So painful and terrible; poor Dean. :( This makes me glad the show decided to fast-forward through his year without Sam -- I don't think I could have watched.

"That was Sammy, standing there, that puppy-doggish pleading-but-not-quite-sorry face he had."
This is Sammy, perfectly wonderfully Sammy -- I know exactly the expression you're describing.

[radge_one]

Thank you so much! I hope subsequent pieces live up to this. ...It's my first SPN story, but I've found I seem to pick characters to empathise with that have very similar personalities, so I've had practise. :)

I'm so glad that the Sammy-look conveyed. That's the first look I always think of when it comes to Sam.