Just a quick fic

[rachel2205]

This was written for the first challenge of thegameison_sh, and now the results are revealed I can deanon. Now as my friends will know, this month I moved countries, and so I actually wrote this piece just before the deadline. Since I didn't have time to think of much for the prompt, which was "first", I fell back on ... sex. So enjoy this 700ish word jaunt

Comments

[ext_248116]

Oh...
Hey, you just stopped here and leave us hanging? Oh no!

^_^ just kidding. This is lovely.

[rachel2205]

hee, thank you for reading!

[talia_sparkle]

Sherlock always knows doesn't he? Lovely little fic. Very nice!

[rachel2205]

Sherlock and his KNOWING WAYS. Thank you!

[imhit]

Love this.

[rachel2205]

yay! <3

[rachel2205]

Thank you! And is that a Lawrence icon I spy? :D

[nox_candida]

Oh wow. HOT. lol, I love me some wank!fic, and this was just fantastic. John was very in-character and I love the detail of the sexuality spectrum and Harry's soft spot for George Clooney. I loved this bit, too: And so he pulled down his pyjama bottoms and knocked one off, thinking about Sarah with grim determination. When he came, teeth gritted, it was more relief than pleasure. That having one off while thinking of Sarah requires grim determination. Really, this was just so awesome, especially when (at the end) we discover that Sherlock's been listening. And I really like that you don't hit us over the head with what he's thinking. It's nice and understated and leaves something to the imagination. lol, and it's very easy to be patient when I have something this awesome to tide me over. :)

[rachel2205]

So glad you like it, hon!