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Feb 20, 2007 03:13

This is a fic inspired by myplugin_baby, though it's not directly about him. It is, however, hoped he'll enjoy it - and that you will, too!

Very quickly churned out in the last hour, and not even proofed. Just want to get it out there and enjoyed!

Title: The Boy
Word count: around 2000
Fandom: LabyrinthPairing: Jareth/OC ( Read more... )

film: labyrinth, jareth, rating:adult

Comments 9

launcelot_dulac February 20 2007, 03:53:15 UTC

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WOW WOW WOW

You are one amazing and gifted writer, and this has really made my day! And wow, that character is rather amazing. :-D

*standing ovation*

I nodded and smiled, and pushed him down onto the bed. His dark hair was lovely against the white sheets, as I had known it would be. Delicately I stroked his face, the curve of his cheeks, the line of his jaw, and watched his chest rise and fall rapidly. I leaned in and kissed him lightly, barely parted lips to his, and even that gentle touch made him moan into my mouth. Oh, yes. Ripe.

The Labyrinth, where everything is possible and nothing is what it seems..

The boy and Jareth choose the path between the stars..

I could see Jareth spinning the crystals and watching the dreams of the world..

At first, I thought Jareth was going to trick the boy, but amazing. I'm in absolute raptures about this fic, I cannot express enough. Thanks much, Doctor R. :) Mind if I link this in my journal? :D

rachel2205 February 20 2007, 13:00:19 UTC

Go for it, sweetie! So glad you enjoyed! :D

confusedkayt February 20 2007, 04:18:59 UTC

Damn, girl. This is hot and amazing. Amazing.

confusedkayt February 20 2007, 04:21:25 UTC

Damn, girl. This is hot and amazing. Amazing.

Which is thorohgly inadequate, upon reflection. I ought to be saying something all wordy and smart, but I'm all breathy and amazed. So there.

rachel2205 February 20 2007, 13:01:12 UTC

Hee, yay! So glad you enjoyed it. Woo!

seaforanswers February 20 2007, 05:42:11 UTC

Love it, of course. You somehow manage to get into Jareth's head and give him a whole new spin. I love that he's darker than the PG-13 movie version. And for some reason I love this line:

I enjoy a jaded palate only if I had created it.

rachel2205 February 20 2007, 13:01:43 UTC

Huzzah! Well, you know me, I enjoy a bit of darkness... I've always thought Jareth was quite a naughty boy.

ultharkitty February 20 2007, 16:49:56 UTC

That was very cool :)

rachel2205 February 20 2007, 17:12:17 UTC

Thanks for reading!