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rachel_wilder

FIC - The Clear Space of Knowing

Oct 23, 2008 15:17

Title: The Clear Space of Knowing
Authors: rachel_wilder
Rating: T (aka PG-13)
Summary: Written for fnl_laundrylist #29 prompt 1 - What was J.D.'s reaction to Matt and Julie's critique of his trophey room? How does he feel about the pressure put on him? Is he ready to be the Booster's golden boy?

( JD McCoy hadn't lived in Dillon very long, but he knew this could only be one person-this must be Jason Street. )

fan fiction, friday night lights

Comments 9

kadymae October 23 2008, 20:32:08 UTC

1) I like how you pulled Jason into this.
2) That last line broke my heart.

rachel_wilder October 23 2008, 20:33:12 UTC

I have to add this at the end--I hadn't written anything and then I read your story and it just made me think of this. And so I wrote it. Quickly.

1407graymalkin October 23 2008, 22:20:39 UTC

1)Y'all WROTE SOMETHING!!

2)Oh my God. I NEEEEEED Jason and J.D. to meet. Because he would use that end line. Because it's amazing. I can hear it being stolen right now.

rachel_wilder October 23 2008, 23:45:29 UTC

I have NO faith it's going to happen. Except in my world.

Cause in my world, Jay Street would have been on that field last night---you know he would have been.

Oh well, we always have season 1.

1407graymalkin October 23 2008, 23:51:53 UTC

But it was so sad! At the end! And they drove him!

shelbecat October 24 2008, 12:18:00 UTC

RAACCCHHEEELLLL!!!!!! When the hell did you write fic!!!!!

Jesus - and fic it is!!! I should have known it would be Jason fic and not just JD fic but they were both so great!

but now he'd gone and acted like a jackass in front of QB1. And the coach's daughter.

I didn't think about Julie being the 'coach's daughter' in that scene - just that it was Matt and a 'girl'. But JD would definitely be more embarrassed that it was Julie instead of some random girl. Good catch.

JD looked down at the former quarterback's hand. Some of his fingers were curled toward his hand, the others were sticking out straight.

"Just shake the hand, JD," Jason instructed him.

Ha ha. Apparently Jason has grown a pair in his absence! I like it!

"Any other advice?"

Jason smiled and nodded. "Yeah. Keep your head down."

Dear sweet baby Jesus - could you break my heart a little more forcefully please? Great, great story.

(WHEN DID YOU WRITE FIC!?!)

rachel_wilder October 24 2008, 12:30:31 UTC

Uh, when did I write? Late yesterday afternoon. It was devilc--she woke the muse.

shelbecat October 24 2008, 12:31:29 UTC

Well I am typing at this very moment - this is contagious!

rachel_wilder October 24 2008, 13:06:19 UTC

Woo hoo!