the light of daring burning in the heart

Nov 15, 2009 18:32



Companion piece to and maybe i'm in love

Title: the light of daring burning in the heart
Pairing: Jack/Ianto

Genre: Romance
Rating/Warning/Spoilers: Adult concepts and language, Extreme levels of fluff, Spoilers for S1
Author's Notes: This was supposed to be a companion piece to and maybe i'm in love from Ianto’s POV but it turned out very ( Read more... )

fic, ianto, and maybe i'm in love, jack/ianto, jack, light of daring burning in the heart, torchwood

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hab318princess November 15 2009, 21:37:37 UTC
you know, it doesn't have to be gentler... this is Jack and Ianto, they aren't soft, they are two broken men as you say who happen to fit and fix each other

great fic

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rachel_lk November 16 2009, 16:42:22 UTC
Thank you! I guess I was just worrying unnecessarily about it... :)

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Re: interesting rachel_lk November 16 2009, 16:56:47 UTC
Argh; I totally forgot about that incident with Myfanwy. Thank you for pointing that out to me, I hate seeing mistakes in my work, so I shall have to rethink this a bit. Thanks for the review!

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remuslives23 November 16 2009, 03:25:00 UTC
I didn't think this needed softening at all! I think it was lovely with all its edges - just like Ianto and Jack. I would love to see the circle come to a close with some kind of reciprocation of the mirror message from Jack as was hinted at in Jack's POV. :)

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rachel_lk November 16 2009, 17:06:26 UTC
Hmm, funnily enough, I did write that scene with Jack coming out the shower after seeing the message Ianto wrote, but for some reason it never made it to the final cut (much like most of the stuff I write). I'll probably take you up on your circle-closing fic since any excuse to write/procrastinate/not work is welcomed and a couple of ideas have just springed up. Thanks for the review! :)

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nancybrown November 16 2009, 03:34:30 UTC
I really enjoyed this. Lovely and introspective.

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rachel_lk November 16 2009, 17:06:53 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it :)

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blaid_drwg November 18 2009, 13:15:09 UTC
Wonderfull

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rachel_lk November 19 2009, 18:13:32 UTC
Thank you!

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