Fanfiction

[airgid_chead]

Title: In the Eye of the Viewfinder
Characters: Ritsuka, Soubi and others
Rating: T
Summary: Twenty-one-year-old Ritsuka works as a photographer. Sometimes, he does a scoop for the police with his friend, Keita, despite his fighter's protests. One day, they get the scoop of their lives: nailing one of the most dangerous yakuza in Japan.

Comments

[crowncomposer]

Woo-hoo!; two chapters to read when life finally lets go of me. :P

"A little problem resulting in surgery"? Good grief, I hope you're okay! :O

"It worked. Apparently Nisei always reacted better to being yelled at." I'll admit- I giggled quite a bit when I read that. :D

I really liked these past two chapters; you've done a good job of keeping the tension. Even though I knew who they were going to meet, a car ride with Nisei is never predictable. Can't wait 'till the next one; I've got a feeling that Keita's going to shortly be having a heart attack with all of this new information he's learning. :P

Oh, and that little bit with Soubi was fun too- "Arrgghh, what has Ritsuka gotten himself into now?"

[airgid_chead]

And there will be another coming up tomorrow or on Saturday ;)

Well, maybe I should have said it's not such a little problem but resulting in a very small surgery XD I'm recovering :) That is, I'm stuck on my bed with an immobile leg XD

I'm glad you did. I mean, some parts of the story are meant to be funny, especially those with Nisei.

Thank you :) Yeah, poor guy, he didn't expect that when going on the job XD

I like writing them all older and with slightly different attitudes than in the manga. That's why Soubi is both worried and angry with Ritsuka and Ritsuka is more self-confidant and a bit "darker". Not the right word, maybe more Seimei or Nisei-like.