"Kaleidoscope" [ a SoubixSemei fic]

[ca_te]

Hi everyone!^^ this is the first time I write a fic about Soubi and Semei.it's written from Soubi's point of view and it's a little pictuer of how i see their relationship, which really intrigues me.
This is for sashide , who suggested it to me and made me write a loveless fic after a long time, for which i really thank her!

Ps: I'll post the other

Comments

[phyrexians]

ooooh interestin.

The only critique I have is the "'cause"'s seem OOC. I don't think Soubi would use slang like that =O.

But besides that, it's very intriguing :3.

Thank you <3.

[ca_te]

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Oh I see, actually I don't really think about OOCness while I write..thanks for pointing it out!

I'm glad you found it intriguing ^^
You're welcome <3
Hope I didn't disappoint you..

[phyrexians]

Nope nope. It's light with just hints of darkness, and I love how you described Seimei's eyes as kaledoscopes.

[ca_te]

Glad to know that then^^ I was a bit worried 'cause I had never written a SoubixSemei.
Thanks a lot again!!

[ca_te]

Thank you very very much! <3
I?m happy you liked that bit^^ I wrote it thinking that it would be very Soubi like^^