Fic: Away

[rabidchild]

Title: Away
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Satchmo, Neal, Moz
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 1600
Summary: Neal dog-sits. Satchmo needs medicine. Hilarity ensues. We’ve all been there.

A/N: Sequel to Because He Can,. For the “attacked by a creature” square on my H/C Bingo card.

Many thanks to elrhiarhodan for the beta.

Comments

[yeomanrand]

You can't tell me El didn't do that on purpose. Sweet. Awesome. Love the Satchmo stories. Satch is the bomb.

"Don't look at me like that."

[rabidchild]

Aw, thanks! Satch is awesome.

[sholio]

*helpless grinning* Having doctored sick pets, I loved this. And Satchmo's viewpoint on the humans in his life (and his dog POV in general) is completely awesome. :D

[rabidchild]

There's not a single detail in here that I haven't personally experienced with my own pets!

[sahiya]

*snort* Oh poor Satchmo.

And poor Neal. The only thing worse than medicating a dog is medicating a cat. And the only thing worse than either is doing it to an animal that isn't yours!

[rabidchild]

And poor Neal's shirt! And I tell you, about the only time I'm grateful my cats' former owner had them declawed is when I have to administer pills.

[coffeethyme4me]

Love it! I love how you do his voice with few contractions and lots of repetition. So cute!! :-D

[rabidchild]

IKR? It's this weird doggie cadence I affect. Somehow, i think that's how my dog talks...

[virgo_79]

Oh my lord, I love this. I LOVE THIS STORY.

**steals story and runs away to put it in sock drawer**

Your Satchmo POV is darling, hilarious, and, I suspect, spot-on. Oh, to be inside a dog's mind. :)

[deathjunke]

**steals story from virgo_97's sock draw and hides on the high shelf in my closet**

[rabidchild]

As long as there's lots of breathing space... :)

[rabidchild]

It's fun to be inside a dog's mind! At least mine - they sleep all day and get lots of treats.