WC Fic: Live Through This

Dec 28, 2013 06:08

Title: Live Through This
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Moz, Jones; established Neal/Jones
Spoilers: None
Content Notice: hurt/comfort
Word Count: 1,700
Summary: With Neal on the edge of death, Clint finds comfort and support where he least expects it.

A/N: This is a timestamp to my “Undeniable Chemistry” series, set sometime in the middle ( Read more... )

fics, fandom: white collar, activity: 12 days of ficmas 2013, character: clinton jones, genre: h/c, series: undeniable chemistry, character: moz, pairing: neal/jones

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calis_1st December 28 2013, 13:32:24 UTC
This is freaking awesome. I really love this 'verse. I adore the relationship you've written between Neal and Jones, and to add Mozzie - THIS side of Mozzie - is perfect. Moz may be quirky and conspiracy theory-driven, and orderline alcoholic, but he does have depths of feeling and a seriousness that we rarely see, and you've brought that out wonderfully. Your last line says everything.

Thanks so much for posting this.

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rabidchild January 3 2014, 18:35:19 UTC
I have been wanting to write the scene where Jones confesses how much Neal means to him to Moz for MONTHS, and I also realized there wasn't all that much Moz in this 'verse either, so I combined those two things to write this tag. I'm so happy it worked for you.

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sapphire2309 December 28 2013, 13:40:24 UTC
Mother hen Moz is absolutely perfect for so many reasons.

“If either of us had hair, it’d be white,” Moz agrees. <-- Love this line!!

Moz helping Jones for at least some selfish reasons makes sense, like him letting Ellen win at cards for dirt on Neal :)

The last line, awww!!

Loved this :D

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rabidchild January 3 2014, 18:36:20 UTC
Aw thanks! That hair line was one of those happy things that just occur in your brain and you laugh out loud at the ridonk, but I had to use it

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elrhiarhodan December 28 2013, 14:35:42 UTC
Freakin' awesome barely begins to scratch the surface of my feelings for this fic. First, to wake up and find a timestamp for my favorite 'verse, and then find it to be THE timestamp I didn't know I was needing, is made of utter win. And even better, that it's told from Mozzie's POV, so unexpected in this 'verse.

I somehow get the feeling the Moz arranged for Doctor Oncology and his entire staff to be out, just so Clinton could have a place to sleep without leaving the hospital.

Beautiful, just beautiful.

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rabidchild January 3 2014, 18:37:30 UTC
Thanks! I've been wanting to write this for ages (and parts of it were already a WIP), so Ficmas was the perfect excuse!

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ladyrose42 December 28 2013, 15:00:55 UTC
Suitlings - always love new terms for members of the establishment.
Mozzie actually paying for his own booze.

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rabidchild January 3 2014, 18:38:06 UTC
Moz can and will pay for his own booze, of course, but it's much more fun when he doesn't

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pooh_collector December 28 2013, 16:15:02 UTC
This was just chock full of win. I love this 'verse and this was an amazing addition.

You wrote Mozzie perfectly. His voice, his words, 'suitlings' 'staple gun' his version of Kate, his protectiveness toward Neal.

This is a beautiful gem.

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rabidchild January 3 2014, 18:38:32 UTC
Thanks so much!

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