WC Fic: The Adventures of Captain Neal of Star Command

[rabidchild]

Title: The Adventures of Captain Neal of Star Command
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Neal, Elizabeth, Satchmo, Peter
Spoilers: None
Content Notice: Fluff, kidfic
Word Count: 1,500
Summary: Neal and Satchmo spend the day in Neal's imagination; Elizabeth is a reluctant, if amused, participant.

A/N: Timestamp in my “Kid Neal Chronicles." This was

Comments

[ivorysilk]

AWWWWWWW. That was so sweet!!

[rabidchild]

kid!Neal strikes again!

[doctor_fangeek]

I loved this when I read it in DC, and I loved it all over again this morning. :-)

I'm sure El's eyes were stinging because it was dry in there. Yes, that's it. And kid!Neal, bright and active and adorable. Awww. Glad you published this!

[rabidchild]

Yes, or else she had to get new contacts...

[elrhiarhodan]

Awwww - you don't know how many times I've gone back to re-read this on my LJ. It's so perfect.

Thank you for reposting it.

[rabidchild]

XD

[ocmiss]

That was so sweet it hurts my teeth lol.
I really loved this imaginary play between Satchmo and Neal, those two are adorable. Hope we'll get more from this verse :)

[rabidchild]

Thanks! There may be more here - I get urges to write kidfic all the time.

[caseyf123]

Awwwww.....that was so cute. I love de-aged Neal. I can just picture El getting teary at him calling her Mommy.

[rabidchild]

Who wouldn't, right?