Fic: Only Son, Part 2

[rabidchild]

Title: Only Son
Rating: R for violence
Characters/Pairings: Neal and Moz, (though P/E/N established relationship is in there)
Warnings/Triggers: child abuse
Spoilers: None
Word Count: ~8800 for both parts
Summary:  The story of how Neal and Mozzie met, and why Neal never finished high school. Continues my Origins set of pre-series fics, but can be read

Comments

[elrhiarhodan]

Whew....I thought I was going to have to wait.

This is utterly terrific...and everyone is perfectly in character, particularly Mozzie. Yes - I can definitely see him being the Detroit mob's golden goose. Most definitely.

A tour d'force. Powerful and real and I wish this was canon.

[rabidchild]

Thank you. This one really flowed out of me once I got started - thanks for the encouragement along the way. Whew! I should go get some work done or something.

[micheleeeex]

i loved this!

[rabidchild]

Thanks - I'm glad!

[donutsweeper]

love this look at how Moz and Neal might have met

[rabidchild]

I'm sure it'll be Jossed soon enough! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[amycat1959]

So what if it's Jossed... THis is better than canon... :-)

[rabidchild]

Thanks for saying that - I tend to agree. I found When Moz Met Neal... to be a disappointment.

[ultracape]

Great story and definitely plausible.

[rabidchild]

Oh my, thank you so much.

[embroiderama]

I really love teen!Neal and young Mozzie here. The way they meet and bond makes a lot of tense.

[rabidchild]

I am absolutely in love with teen!Neal. As a character. Not in a stalkery, Marybeth LeTourneau way...more like a mom maybe. Uh, idk, I should shut up now. *eyes shift*