Comments | rabidchild: Fic: The Stream of Warm Impermanence, Part 2

rabidchild

Fic: The Stream of Warm Impermanence, Part 2

Mar 12, 2012 07:56

Title: The Stream of Warm Impermanence
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Pre-teen!Neal, Peter, El, Moz
Spoilers: None
Content Notice: De-aging; violence against a child, but nothing you wouldn’t see on TV
Word Count: 15,200
Summary: Neal Burke is 11 and the most popular boy in school. His dad Peter is a badass FBI agent, his mom Elizabeth makes ( Read more... )

fics, fandom: white collar, genre: angst, genre: h/c, character: elizabeth burke, character: peter burke, character: neal caffrey, genre: gen, character: matthew keller, character: moz, genre: au/crack, genre: kidfic

Comments 70

elrhiarhodan March 12 2012, 12:31:14 UTC

What a perfect start to the fest! You've given me a very high bar to aim for.

Brava!

rabidchild March 14 2012, 15:24:55 UTC

Aww, thanks!

kanarek13 March 12 2012, 13:35:13 UTC

*iz ded* *on the first day of the challenge!*

OMG, you've just made my day! This story is perfect, now I wanna go home and cuddle it like the a teddybear :P

This is such a treat, I don't even know where to begin! I love Peter, El and Neal as a family, the love and safety, cookies and hugs and new puppy (yes, there might have been a few tears running down my face... allegedly... not only at the very end :P).

And angsty plot twist was angsty... how come I didn't see that one coming? Must've been distracted by all the awwwwwwww moments :D

Now I'm gonna read it again and flail some more... :D

Simply amazing!!!

rude02 March 13 2012, 22:26:02 UTC

I don't like kid-fics much but this one is really good!
Kudos!

rabidchild March 14 2012, 16:30:19 UTC

Thanks! It was hell-fun to write.

rabidchild March 14 2012, 15:26:07 UTC

Aww...I've read this comment about a dozen times - it makes me all warm and fuzzy.

ladygray99 March 12 2012, 14:03:40 UTC

I'm not usually into sort of magical kid!fic but this is truly cute. I like Uncle Mozzie teaching him all kinds of naughty little habits, just in case. It would be interesting to know just how Mozzie talked Peter and El into letting him around their son.

rabidchild March 14 2012, 15:27:49 UTC

Ah, yes, Uncle Moz is truly looking out for wee!Neal - there are some skills every young man needs to have, at least in his brain.

leonie_alastair March 12 2012, 14:10:23 UTC

Wow! I've read it twice and I can't think of anything else to say. Just Wow! Great story!

rabidchild March 14 2012, 15:28:11 UTC

That is the kind of feedback every writer wants to see - thank you so much.

lauracollared March 12 2012, 14:42:43 UTC

AAAAHHHH Amazing!!!

Amazing amazing amazing amazing.

I don't even what else to say. I loved this!

rabidchild March 14 2012, 15:28:44 UTC

Awww...did I make you squee? Such lovely things to say - thank you.

lauracollared March 14 2012, 17:40:17 UTC

You did! I squeed! :D