First Fic

[rabid_wulf]

Liz Lemon is a Horn Dog (30 Rock)
Liz/M, Liz/F
This is for adults.
I do not own any of these characters.
Note: This is my first fanfic ever. Also un-betaed. That said, be vicious in your criticism.

Comments

[frey_at_last]

You used the ensemble! Hooray! This is super funny but somehow believable. I especially like the Pete and the Toofer encounters (HAHA, Liz would not stand for that wink), and the end of the Jack encounter is kind of unexpectedly sweet, like their early friendship. The only thing I'd say is that I was a little confused about when these were set, but maybe that's because I went into it thinking it was a "dirty thirties" thing.

Anyway, nice job!

[rabid_wulf]

Thank you so much for your feedback! I intended these to be roughly chronological, but some of the elements (like the Michael Jackson thing) threw that off. Oops. I'm glad the Jack part mostly worked, because I think I went too far in my attempt to make him not mean.
Cheers!

[muic]

This was different but despite how sex-averse Liz is, you made these situations possible. The Jack/Liz part was hot and I like that it didn't end feeling like a mistake.

Love the ensemble element!

[rabid_wulf]

Thanks! I'm thankful it came off hot, I don't usually write sexy times. I love everybody so much I had to use most of them!