Comments | rabid_lola: How Much (#079-Heal, Midou Ban x Kudo Himiko)

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How Much (#079-Heal, Midou Ban x Kudo Himiko)

Jun 11, 2007 17:43

Title: How Much
Fandom: Get Backers
Characters: Midou Ban x Kudo Himiko
Prompt: #79, Heal
Word Count: 1,528
Rating: PG
Author's Notes: DRAMA. So much drama it made me laugh. And note: making these two apologize to each other is NOT easy. Not easy at all.

( How much do you care about her, Ban-chan? )

otp_100, fic, ban x himiko

Comments 2

entity_tama June 11 2007, 10:23:51 UTC

Ginji uses his denseness as an excuse to get away with saying things that might provoke Ban's killing intent. That having been said, please excuse me while I go laugh my head off.

*ROFLs*

I like the ending? Hahaha. Whatever make you say that? XD

This is like your usual GB fluff with a little something extra, which makes it a whole different experience... Did that make sense? XDDD The new style fits, dude. You pulled it off. Heck, you pulled everything off so well, my head still hasn't completely recovered from the shock. Ginji rawks HARD. He manages to get Ban to think about his actions AND provides comic relief. Nice. XD

And the nicest thing about this is... It isn't cliche. It's all IC. Whatever cranial pains you've had to suffer to write this was WORTH IT. I bow down to your mad writing skillz. XD

yuncyn June 11 2007, 14:16:39 UTC

I think you do drama quite well actually. ^___^ And yes, getting those two to interact civilly is a right PAIN IN THE ARSE. (but that's the way we love 'em. 8D)

I love the descriptions you use. But the best part for me was when she just abruptly tossed the box into his hands - abrupt, sharp, short and says a LOT for those few words. Marvelous! ♥

The ending and its epilogue is BRILLIANT. XDDDDDDD Suffice to say, I enjoyed it muchly <3 8DD